Reviews for Drake Smith's Pokemon Journey: Kanto
Mr.Black64 chapter 13 . 3/12
Again.. nothing makes sense.

Mason just won... Drake didn't talk shit and Mason just randomly runs up and punches him.

Now i see how epic length fanfics can barely get reviews. Not worth reading this to see if the sequel actually gets better.
Mr.Black64 chapter 9 . 3/12
Yea... saw the sequel to this while hunting stories. Hopefully this story gets better along with the sequel.

First Drake doesn't like his father very much. Then suddenly he misses him and thinks about him all time.

Coleman was an annoying little shit that even thought the same thing. Suddenly he's a decent guy and Drake considers him a great friend.

Where are all these sudden changes coming from? It seems like it just depends how you feel at the time and not based on anything in the story.
Mr.Black64 chapter 1 . 3/12
I enjoy the start but one thing i never see is the parents (if they are ex-trainers or related to pokemon raising in anyway) giving their child a strong back up pokemon with a starter. If the pokemon loves the child then a beginner having a strong pokemon wouldn't be an issue and the safety of their kid would be a lot higher.
Draco55 chapter 77 . 2/19
You need to do your research better. Team Rocket doesn't know shit about Mewtwo.
Draco55 chapter 74 . 2/19
Nasty Plot has no affect on drain punch.
Draco55 chapter 72 . 2/19
Ground type moves do not affect Gliscor.
Draco55 chapter 68 . 2/18
There is no Distortion Dimension. The only thing Darkrai rules over is the world of dreams/ nightmares.
Draco55 chapter 61 . 2/18
O.k. I'm finally going to say it. Fire Blast is not a humanoid shape. It is a Kanji. Seriously, that has pissed me off for a while.
Draco55 chapter 59 . 2/18
Vaporeon cannot have Draco meteor.
Draco55 chapter 54 . 2/13
Electabuzz doesn't have Thunder in his moveset. You did this once with Kadabra's Ice Punch as well.
Draco55 chapter 45 . 2/12
Mud Shot doesn't affect Charizard. Charizard is a Flying type, and Mud Shot is a Ground type move. Ground type moves cannot affect Flying types.
Draco55 chapter 44 . 2/12
You had Tangela evolve twice. Tangela had already evolved in the Sabrina episode.
Draco55 chapter 43 . 2/12
Moltres is Victory Road, have you never played FR/LG or R/B/G/Y?
Draco55 chapter 41 . 2/11
Again, Tangela is in a Luxury Ball, just to emphasize it. Also, Rage only up attack if they were damaged right after using it. And Meditate doesn't affect Special Attacks, i.e. Psybeam.
Draco55 chapter 40 . 2/11
Okay, so you had said Premier Ball, but none of Tony's Pokemon are in a Premier Ball. Tangela is in a Luxury Ball.
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