Love It!

What a nice simple sweet story. I love the simplicity of this, combined it with your talent it became one hell of a story. Sometimes when authors write this kind of stories, they come off boring but not this one.

Thanks for sharing this :)

I loved this story, just bummed it ended. Any future takes ?! Hehe.

Perfection.

This Fic is so amazing!

I’m so happy to be reading this again!, love it!,

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I thought this would be a short story. Ha! Instead it entailed long beautiful well written chapters. Thank you!

loved it!

I did like your imperfect Edward who sorely needed to learn some important life lessons, but I preferred your no-nonsense woman with a plan Bella. Their personalities ended up meshing so well, that even with the slight uncertainty ahead - there was no need to tie this up with a neat little bow.

And I loved that little observation at the service about the husbands still with their first wives, versus those with girls young enough to be their daughters. How true.

Enjoyed this, thanks. Refreshing to read about a semi-loser Edward (with reasons to be slacking and potential to be uber successful, obv!).

Very sweet!

Dang I wish there'd been even a small mention that they tracked down Jane. But I have no other complaints! Great story

I just knew Jane would do that.

Thanks for sharing.