|Reviews for Help|
| haylE15 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
The only critic could be that you should have wrote the dream in intalics so it'd stand out...
But except that, it was really good :)
| Happy flappy chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
| MM-CB chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Um, Ginny's not older than Luna, they're in the same year... Othwerwise nice :)
| Fandommember chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
I really like it
| Loveableheart chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Nice! Can you write more?
| He-Who-Must-Be-Read chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
The storyline's rather boring, but nice sex scenes!
| tonksremus2332 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011