Reviews for Crosshair
bnoel chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
WOW! its no doubt ur a great writer! l luv it... the sexual tension u created for Lance and Ilana. Grate story hpoe u writ more!:)
Roadhouse12 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Super nice! Keep up the good work! O.k.
Roadhouse12 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
KEEP FINISHING THIS STORY! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! WILL THEY KISS OR WHAT! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ADD A KISS SCENE! !
zheng he chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I love this so much I read it like, 3 times. 33

Lance's deal with the sweater reminded me of his shivering in the beginning of the Homecoming episode. You tied in his emotions with the most perfect amount of vagueness (is that a word? xD).

And the court dance! That was my fave part! Just...yesss!

This story is now my canon. Hope you write more for this fandom!
purpledragon6 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
awww that was very well done!
TigerQueen chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Thank you for finally posting this! (Why do you hold out? Why? Everything you write is so well thought-out and characterized and the prose is lovely and what else are you waiting for?)

So many things to enjoy, here. Poor conflicted Lance. "You know what sex is, right?" His crawling skin and the sweater he needs but isn't wearing. Calling "Ilana" in sudden silence. Oof, but you know how to hit the heartstrings.