|Reviews for Things Fall Apart|
| Lavenderangel chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
There is something extremely heartbreaking about Dawn calling Tara's voicemail, most likely just to hear her voice. I read this as a oneshot, but I think it would be interesting if you did decide to continue.
| Sapphic Snorlax chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This tore my heartstrings as soon as I realized Tara was already dead. I enjoyed Dawn censoring herself; very fitting, especially considering her "audience."
I'm glad you're putting up something for the Tara and Dawn relationship; it's something I always enjoy reading because it just makes so much sense. I'm looking forward to the promised update!
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
| Idiosyncratic Delusions chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This is fantastic! Was tugging at my heartstrings and I'm one of those bitter and aloof people, so well done! This would be great as a one shot, which I originally thought it was, but it appears you will be adding more chapters, so I'm excited! Can't wait for more, this looks like it will be very good!