|Reviews for The Back Road|
| deJean Smith chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Oh how wonderful! I just want more and more!
| feja chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Very intriguing start. I'm captured ;)
| angeliena chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
In what century is this story?
| mommy2kh chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Hmmm...poison. I wonder if he meant that literaly or metaphorically? Can't wait for more!
| Miss Baby chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Loving it so far. Very eager to learn more about Edward and the concequences his actions will have for the Cullens' position in the town.
| x-rayLady chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Hm, I was already wondering in the first chapter if the story was perhaps set in an earlier time, I am glad to see that confirmed in this one. What period did you chose exactly? Haha, poor Bella, she unwittingly finds herself in a position where both her mother and Michael's mother think she is interested in Michael. I saw it coming, but Bella sure seemed oblivious, lol. I hope she manages to talk them around, though, I wouldn't fancy seeing her tangeled a web spon by the Newton's...
| Mo'Reading chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Can you tell me what their ages are, because they sound young like HS but then Bella refers to Edward Cullen as a man? Being that the time frame sounds to me to be in the early 1900 then it doesn’t make sense that if Edward is a young guy also that Bella would call him a man, plus he’s not reacting like a man, even if he’s never had contact with a girl he reacted a little immaturely. I just want to get the setting straight in my head.
Ok good so now I know Bella’s age.
Oh, oh, seems to me that his mother will be trying to get Bella to marry him, you know since he did get his face scarred while trying to protect her it’s the least she can do and all.
| SammieLynnsMom chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Hmmm...I've got theories, but none are that great yet! Keep up the great work, bb!
| lisamichelle17 chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Thank you so much for the promised update. I loved this chapter. A few of my thoughts:
1) I really love your Bella. She is strong and I am wondering if she even realizes it. The interactions between Bella and her "friends" shows me that she is not like them, at all. I loved that she wanted to see Edward, again. I like the fact that she is curious, by nature. That conversation was enlightening. I kind of want to hug Edward, a lot, even if I get poisoned myself. His loneliness makes me so sad.
2) Bella's, mother, sure seems to have a strong hold on Bella. It almost felt like she wants Bella to be what she wants and not what Bella wants to be. I might be off but she can also read Bella pretty well.
Thank you, again.
| rolozano chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Thanks for the chapter!
I think this will be interesting as all you write!
| dinotopian chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
| Australopithecus Karinsis chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Only two chapters so far and I'm already hooked.
| mugglemom08 chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
| xKrazyKiddx chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
Ok so there's still slot of questions and it seems that the town has now dubbed Michael a "hero"...and to top it all off now people think that Bella and Michael are an item of some sort! Gah! I hope this clears itself out soon! I hope edward is ok after this incident! I cannot wait to see more interaction between Bella and edward! Now I'm more curious and still have a ton of questions on these two!
| avidreader69 chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
She is a risk taker and takes life by the horns, I LIKE her!