|Reviews for The Back Road|
| EMCxo chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
New motorcars, general stores, long skirts and math equations... you've created a nostalgic feeling for the story. Love a period setting.
Burns on Michael's face are very curious.
I look forward to reading this tale.
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I loved it you got hooked but will it stay T rated update soon I can't wait
| edmom chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
| Howl3 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
My first impression of Bella: Coward.
My first impression of Mike: Asshole.
My first impression of Edward: Awesome.
| Lady-Suze chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
This looks really interesting!
Can't wait for the next one.
| bemily chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Ooo, interesting. I love the setting, the small details throughout and the mystery.
| readingisbliss chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I'm hooked already. More please :)
| arfalcon chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Wonderful start! I loved the way you threw us right into the time period with the reference to "carriage" and "motor cars" in the third sentence. Bella's formal references to her father as "Father" and Edward's gallant bow all added to your thoughtful painting of the setting and these characters. This sentence was my favorite: "My fear lessened as the last of the wall loomed ahead and the road meandered away from the unnaturally quiet area." Your writing is so lovely and I'm really excited about this story.
| JessXO chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Definitely sounds intriguing so far. I wonder what Edward is, i take it that he's not a vampire...? Look forward to the next update :)
| Totteacher chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I really enjoyed the first chapter. I wonder if the warbling sound was some sort of mating call from whatever creature Edward is...perhaps that is why Bella was attracted to it, and why Edward was so intent on talking to her...looking forward to the next chapter.
| vertigo33 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
| Gwineveve301 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Well you got me hooked
| catloves18 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Loved this first chapter
| KNG1986 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
I love a good mystery and this looks promising.
| haguchi chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
sounds interesting. :)