Reviews for Transformers: Shinobi Wars
animeman12 chapter 3 . 8/27/2012
well i hope that you write more soon cuz this is good... ah i remember when this Transformer series came out... long time ago
Shadow Knight Destroyer chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
This is good.
OBSERVER01 chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
Toby860 chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
Why do I get the feeling the voice is unicron. That would be so sweet. Please update soon
marie faust chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
is it unicron cuz im sure that primus would not sound that insane
Myrddin le Faye chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
It could have been awesome!
Bondubras of Devoncroix chapter 2 . 11/30/2011
I like this story.

I was a bit apprehensive at seeing Naruto and Transformers being crossed, but it is actually really well done.

As for the dark voice: Might it be Unicron? That seems to be the closest...

Nice job. I plan on keeping an eye on you.

The Apple's Pie chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
This is really interesting, and while not a crossover instantly 'clicks' when you think of compatibility of series, the way you've done it surprisingly has made it work. I'm happily impressed with it and the characterization of the Transformers and children.

Sasuke and Naruto sound to be a touch off on the other hand; perhaps this is because they have been acting more 'mature' without clarification for why they are doing so.

Some examples: What made Sasuke come to the realization that he doesn't need to constantly test himself? How has Naruto so casually brushed off loosing his home and precious people? With Sasuke 'dying'? Has he been coping with this by immersing himself in work, to distract himself? Smiling and laughing it off and pushing the grief away?

Regardless of how/if you decide to address these questions, I am looking forward to reading more of your story. :3
god of all chapter 2 . 9/5/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Not In Use Anymore 35 chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Have the Kyuubi give Naruto knowledge on Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, and other types of jutsu (the Kyuubi is Chakra that took physical form and gained a conciseness and intelligence so it has to know about every jutsu their was back in Naruto's timeline) so he can be of more use when he helps the Autobots in battle against the Decepticons, since his jutsu arsenal since he's limited to uses clones, Henge no jutsu (Calling it Transformation would get confusing since he's working and living with Autobots), Substitution, useful Shadow clones, Rasengan, the 1000 years of death forbidden finger jutsu (which is only useful against Sasuke), a mix between brawler and street fighter for Taijutsu, Kyuubi Naruto mode(Naruto when he uses he uses his Nine Tailed fox/Human form), and no knowledge of Genjutsu and since he'll have to fight Sasuke on a regular daily basis he has a major disadvantage do to Sasuke having a who is an Uchiha with Full Matured Sharingan meaning Sasuke has major advantage when it comes to genjutsu. Since Kyuubi was once a part of the all powerful 'Juubi no Akuma' (The animal the Juubi is, is currently unknown) so the fox must of be able to give him the Rinnegan, Sharingan, Byakugan, Hyoton, Mokuton, Dead Bone Pulse and Chakra chains, since it was exposed to the chakra of The Rikudou Sennin, Madara Uchiha, Hashirama Senju, Mito Uzumaki, Kushina Uzumaki, Sasuke, Itachi, Haku, Kimimaru and Neji do to it directly or through it's hosts being exposed to the Chakra plus having to use a lot of it's chakra it might of given Naruto their Kekkei Genkais (The Sharingan of Itachi, Madara, and Sasuke are different since it's highly rare for two different Uchihas' Sharingan having similar abilities take Shisui for example his Sharingan can manipulate someones mind) which means we have a Naruto with the ability to use a doujutsu made by the fusion of 3 Sharingans, the Rinnegan (which will give him an affinity for all five Elements including Gravity, Yin and Yang) and a Byakugan of a Hyuuga Prodigy (Call it the Kamigan do not own that Doujutsu is owned and made by the Author known as Konoha's Nightmare The picture is on a link on his acount), from the others he'll gain the ability to use 2 sub elements (Maybe more since he if you go with this idea he can use the five elements, gravity, Yin and Yang), the dead bone pulse, Mito's high affinity for Fuinjutsu and Kushina's Chakra chains. Please consider the idea.
Cylon One chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
Great job.

Real great piece of work.
ark of shadows chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
its Unicron isnt it he is the one that talking Naruto and sasuke and i wouldnt be suprised about that and thanks for the update hope another one comes soon and if iam right pm me dude and also what is your id munber cause this week i'll be working on kitsune and the untouchable maiden and would like your imput
Mata-NuiXIII chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
it's Unicron
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