Reviews for A Shattered Tome
Originaljuan92 chapter 15 . 8/7/2014
Another great story that needs an update.
Miwokgirl101 chapter 15 . 3/8/2013
Okay. This is an awesome story. The characters aren't OOC, pretty realistic according to the series, and you portray Souji's indecisiveness well. Honestly, I see Souji leaning towards Naoto in this story. Just b/c Yukiko and Rise seem to be slightly annoying him at points, he keeps worrying about Naoto and calling her cute, and he seems to be around her the most out of all of the girls. I am aware that you are trying to balance his interactions w/ the other girls as well, but I can't help it, I like Naoto and Souji together. Anways, please please please please update this story. It's too great to be left discontinued. You and Kisdota are some of my favorite P4 authors. Good luck.
DragonGolem chapter 15 . 11/6/2011
Can't wait to see how you resolve all this.
741AuthorNCS chapter 15 . 10/13/2011
Well... Time for some Izanagi-no-Okami time, right Souji?
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 14 . 10/1/2011
DUN DUN DUN, LATE, I AM IN HELL. AND THE SUPRISING PART IS I'M ON WHAT'S SUPPOSED TO BE A VACATION, ANYWAY BETRAYAL, TWIST IS NICE, UNLESS I'M NOT READING THIS RIGHT, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
741AuthorNCS chapter 14 . 9/27/2011
The battle is more interesting that's for sure.
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 13 . 9/21/2011
KINDA GOING SLOW NOW, SO WHAT GONNA HAPPEN WHEN WE GET TO THE OTHER WORLDS ARE YOU GONNA GO WITH THE STORY I SAID OR MERGE THEM WITH THE ONE'S? YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
741AuthorNCS chapter 13 . 9/20/2011
Oh hi, Beezlebub... I look forward to writing you in the future of my story...
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 12 . 9/15/2011
SORRY, BUSY AS HELL THE WORK HAS DOUBLED FOR ME, ANYWAY I KNOW YOU DON'T LIKE KANJI BUT YOU'RE JUST PLAIN BASHING HIM NOW, ALSO THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN THE PEOPLE, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
741AuthorNCS chapter 12 . 9/15/2011
Devil Survivor, please end soon!
741AuthorNCS chapter 11 . 9/8/2011
I got nothing to say. Just keep it up.
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 10 . 8/30/2011
SORRY LATE, I HAD A HELLISH AMOUNT OF COLLEGE WORK TO DO, AND CLASSES AND INTERNSHIP WORK. ANYWAY GOOD CHAPTER AND ALL, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
741AuthorNCS chapter 10 . 8/26/2011
Isn't it ironic that all the update I get are filler/explanation chapters those days, and yet I got an Author's Block on my own filler/explanation chapter?
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 9 . 8/18/2011
SORRY, I WAS UPDATING. ANYWAY LIKE I KEEP SAYING THIS STORIES REALLY MISSING SOMETHING, BUT IT'S SOMETHING I CAN'T EXACTLY EXPLAIN. I DON'T KNOW, MAYBE YOU SHOULD LOOK UP A WRITING OR NOVEL BOOK, THAT'S HOW I MADE A FEW OF MY FICS, YAHAHAHAHAHAHA
741AuthorNCS chapter 9 . 8/17/2011
For some weird reasons, I keep thinking about Digimon episodes when reading this...
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