Reviews for Whirlpool of Love
HelL4DAluCarD chapter 12 . 11/25
Well, this fic certainly turned out interesting. One moment i'm reading smutfest that was pretty graphic mind you, and the next you see i'm reading a decent action fic with a damn good base plotline. It seriously surprised me that you turned a formerly, Lemon fic (I think that was your idea, js), into this. I love it. I have no complaints with the pairing. It is one of the most decent NaruXKushi smut action fic i've read in a while (Mind you, there aren't many fics like yours).
It has a good narrative pace, tho your chapters are a bit short which leaves much to desire for, good grammar with minimal errors, a decent plot that grew gradually with the story and overall, a fun-to-read lemon-turned-action fic. The lemons were pretty descriptive (Idk what to say anymore) and graphic and the plot has gradually grown. The twist and civil war at the end of this chapter was, suffice to say, very very unexpected.
Would like for you to update and do make your chapters a bit more long. That's all.
Alucard out.
just a fan chapter 1 . 9/20
this is such a nice fic... are you ever going to update this?
FanFictionLeon chapter 12 . 9/6
What an amazing story! The plot was healthy while centering around the main couple. Your details were never excessive in either of your chapters so each scene felt fresh and exciting. You captured them well. Thank you for your work!
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 12 . 8/10
Please update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
God idea for a lemon but poor writeing
Steve chapter 12 . 6/9
god damn this got really freaking good, it literally makes me shed a tear for the fact of no updates
Sharpkill375 chapter 1 . 5/29
Is this ever going to be updated in my life time or what...
creepes chapter 9 . 5/16
This is one of the best naruto lemon fanfic i have read, too bad this project is discontinued... ;-; #BringBackWhirpoolofLove
tabbycat15 chapter 1 . 5/11
Guest chapter 9 . 4/14
Love it, LIKE A LOT !
matt951 chapter 6 . 2/4
matt951 chapter 5 . 2/4
alison chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
My name is ALISON from England, would want to tell you all that I was able to put an end to my divorce issue and restore my marriage again, because I never wanted it to happen. I don't know what came over my husband that he was filling for divorce, I tried to talk him out of it when he told me and he didn't listen to me, I had no other option than to seek for the help of a spell caster and now am glad I did. Because if not for the help of spell, I don't know what would have become of me by now because I loved my husband so much that I couldn't stand loosing him. The spell worked like magic with the way and manner my husband change and started showing love instead of the divorce he was planning. I just too happy that everything is in place for me now. I would gladly recommend the use of spell to any one going through marriage problems and want to put an end to it. should email or call his cell DR OBODO ( )(2348155425481) was were I got the help to restore my marriage.
Ranmaleopard chapter 12 . 11/22/2014
This is amazing I really can't wait for more!
GodOfSins chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
Love the story so far hope it continues good luck
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