|Reviews for Finding Her 'Perfect'|
| loveisacage chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
This is amazing. And you should most definitely continue.
| cwinky503 chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
Great ending to this story. I too have a feeling that Beckett and Josh are kind of at the last straw part of their relationship. I didn't think the fight was bad or harsh really at all. People say hurtful things like that when they get mad and I felt it was realistic. Great job and can't wait for more of your stories!
| Kaz chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
First of all, thanks so much for taking the time to add a second chapter :o) it was a fantastic conclusion (although that's not to say I don't want more when you have time) and was beautifully written (as always) and completely in character. I thought that you handled the breakup very well. Second thing - good luck with your finals. Thanks so much for your brilliant fics. Kaz
| Cora Clavia chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
Very accurate of you: in a way, Kate is emotionally cheating on Josh with Castle. She's letting Castle into her life, into her heart while she keeps Josh out of the rougher parts. I absolutely agree with you.
| 14ulysse chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
I sort of have tears in my eyes! lol
I think the fight touched on exactly what is wrong about that relationship. If it had to happen on the show, I think it would be pretty close to what you wrote. It felt real to me! good job.
Of course I can't review without mentioning how I love that you used their 'Always' it's just a simple, perfect way to end this story!
LA EPISODE TOMORROW! CAN'T WAIT!
Keep writing, this was excellent!
| braidonfire chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
GUH. This was so perfect. I really like the fight scene - it sheds a sort of tougher light on the relationship of Kate and Josh, and while - let's be honest here - none of the fandom really knows anything about Josh, this made it feel like we do. It's sort of like you introduced him to us, and made him an actual person instead of just the annoying jackass that gets in the way of our beloved Caskett moments. (;D) So this was great! Amazing job!
| Ariel119 chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
| youkillmypatience chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
You're a brilliant writer.
This story is COMPLETELY true to the characters. It's so REAL.
is there a possible sequel? :D
| SpringBloom chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
This was such an awesome story! Loved it! You did a great job capturing the characters and the interaction between Kate/Castle and Kate/Josh was just fantastic, and the best part is that I can see everything happening in my head. Overall, a brilliant job. Hope you continue with this story :)
| gracie127 chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
I liked it, there's nothing that feels unnatural or stilted or forced, fight with Josh and her deciding to go to Castle included. Looking forward to the sequel.
| GhostWriterLost chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
I think you did a fine job on the fight. It seemed very real and something that two intelligent adults with this kind of history might say to each other in the heat of this particular moment. Not childish, not adolescent snarky/hitting out at the other trying to cause hurt - just full on 'what the hell is happening here and this really can't continue' end-of-relationship adult fight.
I've said for ages i thought Josh needed to be the one to make Kate see/admit that she has more than partnership feelings for Castle - and you've done it here, albeit in a slightly different way than i pictured.
The only thing that would spoil this set of scenes would be if you added a third one where she joins him for a drink and they confess their love for one another and skip off into the double rainbow lit sky to live happily ever after. (Ow, i just made my teeth ache.) That would be reverting to the 'dark side' of the website with stories written for 7 year olds. Having a drink together and Beckett going so far as admitting Castle had been 'a good friend' to her - out loud, to him, would still be momentous, and in keeping with the tone here.
Oh by the way - standing on reasonableness and fortitude in making good decisions ALWAYS includes the ability to change your mind and doing something entirely different tomorrow.
| RGoodfellow64 chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
I believe you're correct that the relationship between Kate and Josh is not all flowers and light. Members of my family are in the medical field, nurses and doctors and a few friends are cardiologists...one is a surgeon. None of them have the schedule that Josh has on the show. They can if they wish, but otherwise no. The character of Josh as written on the show chooses to follow the crazy schedule that keeps him from Kate...it is not forced on him. He can be a nice guy and a great doctor, but I have always been of the opinion that he has absolutely no clue on how to be a boyfriend, or be in a serious relationship.
At least that's how I wrote him off. ;-)
| I'm Widget chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
Wow. Fabulous, fabulous chapter. Wish this wasn't the end, b/c I'd LOVE to see her arrive at Rick's place and what happens after that. Seriously. So please consider either a continuation or a sequel... as soon as life allows. Pretty please?
| jnryan93 chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
I loved this story i feel like it wsa very realistic and the characters really were themselves. Please continue it!
| Alexis93 chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
AMAZING! FANTASTIC! I WANT THE SEQUEL! Or, at least, I'd love to read about that drink. You could really write about their meeting, it would be a masterpiece, trust me. You are really good at writing!