|Reviews for Max's Adventures|
| i'm awesome at singing chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
| shannaplusklaus chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
| PyroTalons chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Um, er, wow. Well, that could have been written better.
More than a little OOC in the short time we see Max.
What's up with the hummingbird? Seriously, is it that hard to write from a character's POV?
Bland, bland, bland, BLAND. Basically nothing happens. Oh, we meet the OC, /splendid/!
Dude. Just no.
Thank you and have a nice day.
| raposarealm chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
OMG. It has FANFICTION.
I read this story for my extended language arts class. For once, I actually enjoyed the book. Today, I was bored with reading and writing DTL fanfiction, so I decided to see if this story had fanfiction. I had highly doubted it, but I discovered FIVE STORIEE. JACKPOT.
From the unfamous DTL fanfic writer,
| 62442padfoot chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Nice! I wonder what will happen next!
| WWEDiva99 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
LOVE IT! Nice work, keep on writing:)