|Reviews for Something Unforgivable|
| Lazov chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
Well now. This is a rather intriguing approach to the whole 'corruption' spiel. Sad it's not going to be finished, but for what it's worth, you did a fantastic job.
| ImaSoBored chapter 4 . 7/6/2013
Awesome so far.
The idea that the unforgivable's cost something other than just energy is good, although it does raise the question on how people like Voldemort and his Death Eaters throw the killing curse around easily enough a few times. But then that really depends on what they cost.
Really, hope you update this story soon
| XMatchBookX chapter 2 . 6/30/2013
So, from what I can read from this, is that Daphne is going to be manipulating Harry throughout the entire story, and Harry is going to be a bitch... Great story Bro.
| Ibskib chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
Would you even need to make the Killing Curse illegal to use on animals, wouldn't the social stigma from using one serve the same purpose?
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
This story is great! Please write more!
| area808code chapter 4 . 12/21/2012
Okay...I'm hooked line and sinker. I love reading this FF story. Sorry, can't be of any help about suggestions about this story. Not very creative. I just like to read. Can't wait for the next update. Aloha.
| GatorLHA2 chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
Fascinating, please continue
| Bladre MKT chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
i have the feeling yer using a theory i read once, cant remeber where, that the killing curse use a tiny soul shard to make a push that trowns out the soul of the target, dunno if yer using exactly that or doing what but i have a feeling yer using soul magic SOON... anyway, this looks like quite the piece, i will be on watch
| Bladre MKT chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
wait... should be harry injured at the leg from the dragon fight? whats he doing jumping around the castle? XD
| Bladre MKT chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
well very good and fun... but i think ya need to fully andress what daphne told harry im getting curious! XD
| Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
'That was why here he currently sat, throwing stones, just a day before the first task' yet, after that there is 10 days in the scenes if i read right, then a timeskip to the first task... 'the day before' has changed meanings since my last english class or maybe ya made a lil slip? XD anyway a interesting idea that i think can go well, and i hope it does. will be on watch... after reading the rest XD
| Hasan Saeed chapter 4 . 8/2/2012
great story plz update soon
| Ibskib chapter 4 . 6/4/2012
I must applaud the author's stance on bashing, it often come across as heavyhanded, and in fics where he comes to his "senses" after years of friendsship, it reflects badly on Harry's character even when that's not the intent.
It's a fascinating fic, and I look forward to seeing what price Harry will end up paying now and in the future in order to stay alive.
| JamesRKS chapter 4 . 6/2/2012
Love the story concept. But its been awhile since you're last update. Do u plan to continue?
| Teufel1987 chapter 4 . 5/30/2012
I ... don't really understand Harry's confrontation with Hermione ...
She said that she was always there, and asked him where he was ...
Then Harry had that flashback that only proved that what she said was either delusional of her or a complete lie ...
And from that flashback, Harry would have remembered that Ron and Hermione knew about the first task and yet did not tell him choosing instead to walk away.
So what issues have been resolved from that conversation? Hermione has shown that she had ignored him, and is not willing to apologise or even admit that she should not have done it, while continuing to upbraid him on choosing the only option he had left to him... she put him there, and then she turns around and says that he shouldn't have done what he did...