|Reviews for The Breeder|
| ShadowLDrago chapter 2 . 1/5/2014
I think the Trainer abandoned the Gibles because they were only average and Gabite as well for some reason.
| Alduin chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
wow...i'm interested that's for sure.
I EV trained my Eevee, but i can't see my trainer sprite treating it as such, it puts a lit into perspective.
*Cuddles eevee protectively*
Keep it up.
| The Fiery Chandy chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
Yikes, poor Gible and Gabite... I wonder why his trainer dumped him here when the other guy said he was pretty good.
Anyways, the descriptions are great. The story is interesting so far though I do have one minor nitpick. The plural of Pokémon names is the same as the singular form, so 'Zubats' is Zubat, 'Seakings' are Seaking, and 'Gibles' are Gible. However, in the case of the Gible, I can forgive that since it's to prove a point the first time it's used.
| Zyborggian chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
MEN OF THE POKE
Waitaminute... How can the Gible distinguish something as a human?... I mean it was just born lol (not trying to be nitpicky just saying)
Also did the Gible actually kill the Pidgey instead of just knocking it out?... thats f-in brutal! And if the trainer is this harsh at THIS age... geeeeeeez he could be like the next Hitler or something O_O