Reviews for The Death of Gollum
GuesssWho chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Poor old Smeagol, his life was so unfair . . .
SFox13 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
no. You can't chang Tolkien's story. Gollum never changed. He wanted the ring and he would kill for it. He bit off Frodo's finger and then fell into the fire of Mount Doom. It would be a good story if you had written Lord of the Rings but you didn't. Also, remember Frodo did not get rid of the ring. If Gollum had not attacked him, the ring would have endured.
The Lord of Insomnia chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
that was amazing and so sad
Poirot'sMustacheMask chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
A great story. Very well written.
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Good description of gollum fading into the dust.
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
This is a good one-shot story.

The details give me a vivid description of what happened in this alternative scene.

I found no grammatical mistakes, which is good and means you have done well proofreading this one-shot.

Good work.

-Aria Breuer