Reviews for Lost in the Ocean
DreamOfTheEndless chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Wow! What an interesting canvas you have going here! The way you are color-coding the islands makes it surreal and intriguing at the same time. And love how Jake is the first one to fall for Bella! Wow! I can't wait to read the rest!


TWILIFE2011 chapter 5 . 5/22/2011
great chapter, loved all the different pov's and the end bit with Bella and Alice was adorable.

Love ya girls.. i'm waiting for next chap ;)

Ash xx
kewlwhip chapter 5 . 5/21/2011
another hit bb! its so sweet to see how things are shifting for them!

kewlwhip chapter 4 . 5/21/2011
love it girl! thanks for the mention as you mean a helluva lot to me too! your the best and i am enjoying how the story is unfolding. We are starting to see Bella finally feeling all those fellings she has always heard about! CANT WAIT

AELGP chapter 5 . 5/21/2011
Alright so I'm just going to say that I hate Jake! He want's bella... he's with someone else.

I love this Edward... he's absolutly perfect for Bella in every sense of the word.

Now Alice... I just love her! It will be interesting to see what Jasper has to say about his sister Dating Edward.

All in all love what a great chapter this is. I can't wait to see if Bella and Edward do have sex.

Keep up the good work
pixie-belle88 chapter 5 . 5/21/2011
Hey Dolly, i don't have to tell you how proud i am of you, you know how well a job you are doing x I love the way Alice feels for Bella and i love our resident Geekward!. "the talk" brillaint! MWAH
TWILIFE2011 chapter 4 . 5/16/2011
yay! they have finally met whooooooo i think its sweet how they had a dance it was such a CUTE moment.

Well done babe and keep up the good work.

Ash xx
ButterballBabe chapter 4 . 5/14/2011
great story keep updating
AELGP chapter 4 . 5/14/2011
I'm so excited that Bella and Edward have had their moment. Thanks for the words keep up the great work
pixie-belle88 chapter 4 . 5/14/2011
Hey Dolly :) Im loving this journey, i so love this adorable Edward. Your doing brill and i'm so glad i met you xx
AELGP chapter 3 . 5/9/2011
Can I just say finally! I'm so glad that she's met Edward. I hope Jake pisses off some where but for some reason I don't think that's going to happen anytime soon. Loved the chaper as per usual keep up the great work!
TWILIFE2011 chapter 3 . 5/8/2011
Are u trying to torture me with that cliffy ending huh?

I'm dying for them to meet already, woman your killin me haha!

Great chapter,keep up the good work and thanks for the shout-out at the begining of the chap :)

Luv ya girl

Now go write some more :P xx
pixie-belle88 chapter 3 . 5/7/2011
Hey Dolly, you know i love this story and glad your continuing it. I hate this Jake!, i wanna punch his puss!. YOur doing brilliantly MWAH
kewlwhip chapter 3 . 5/7/2011
good job bb! i can see the "butterflies" on the horizon. Cant wait for next chappie! GREAT STUFF
kewlwhip chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
i am loving your story. I am glad there was not fireworks when they saw each other i love different and bella not noticing him is AWESOME. keep going bb i cant wait
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