|Reviews for Red Mail|
| chokulit chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
i'm a lurker at your blog so i'm glad to find your stories here in fanfic.
red mail made me want to laugh out loud but i couldn't since i was reading your story while riding the bus. i loved how lisbon was able to turn the tables on jane.
| Chiisana Minako chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Hey! This is Chibi. As this thing wouldn't let me post a second review, gotta go anon :p
Just letting you know I re-read this tonight and it made me smile. Especially after reading your final ANs! *hearts* Whenever you have the time, please do write more fluffy goodness! This is so awesome xD
| bottledlogic chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Haha, this story made my day! :)
| Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I was dying of laughter the whole time. Brilliant!
| justcrazy chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
OMG. I haven't laughed this hard in a while - sooo clever! Thank you!
| Kuhlama chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
| xXCoral-RoseXx chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
This is just genius XD
| Ellkat chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
bahahahahahaha was in stitches over this.
took me a sec with the f's and d's then was like oh!...OH!
poor Lisbon. gotta work on her typing :P
so sooo funny.
| LittleMender chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Sorry! I wasn't signed in. That last review was from me. Still loved the story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
I think I've been suffering some kind of post-fictum depression because I just haven't been interested in Mentalist fiction since I finished Lost at Sea. So, the first time I read this I was kind of detached or something. Anyway, I just read it again, and this is such a nice bit of fluff! Hasn't happened, probably never would, but that doesn't mean it couldn't. Stuff like this does happen in the workplace, and misunderstandings DO happen on TM, and Jane likes to play with innuendo (much to Lisbon's embarrassment and consternation), so why shouldn't she be able to turn a situation to get a little of her own back!
The probability of this happening isn't what's important. What's important is keeping them in character. I had to laugh at Jane-I could just see him scowling and glaring, fist on hip, with Lisbon gloating up at him. And he wouldn't be able to resist following her out of the building after something like this anymore than Hightower would be able to keep from hoping she could just run from them and their dicey conversation.
Sweet little story, i.s.!
| x.imagine.x chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
hahahahhahaha that was hilarious! I loved it!
| PJaneL chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
This is really funny! I think you did light and humour very very well! D & F are just next to each other on the key board! I especially like the part where Lisbon thought Jane's origami gifts for her are surrounding on the of Ugly Duckling instead he was doing Swam Lake!
| Chiisana Minako chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Ever since I read the summary, my head went crazy trying to find all the possibilities. When she said 'origami duck' there was one typo that could have been embarrassing and you know what? It turns out that word could be easily mispelled in two ways, since mine wasn't it xD.
Before I forget, I caught a few typos :)
"[..]of a stretch for her to believe I was only do so to stop you[..]"
"[..]to see if they left in separate cares or not."
When it said Lisbon had just answered JANE's email, I thought it was all on him. After all it IS Jane. The fact that he wasn't at fault made it veeery amusing.
"It's not like you haven't done it before, Jane so what's the big deal?"
"Yes, but it's been a while,"
I was chuckling so hard at this part. Even though I hadn't gotten yet how her email implied actual sex, I knew that was what they were talking about xD. Is it wrong that I find cute that he was a bit embarrassed about admitting that?
It makes me curious though that she didn't say 'origami duck' in her email, or what she was meaning to say anyway xD. Did she assume he knew she was talking about a craft out of paper-folding that she skipped the 'origami' part :P?
But OMG. I could practically HEAR and FEEL Lisbon's embarrassment. And who could blame her? xD Surely Jane wasn't making it any easier.
"Oh Madeline, don't fret. Lisbon was just jealous of our kiss, so she wants to make sure I give her extra attention."
What a way to make it worse lol. But I can't be too mad at Jane. He IS annoying on a daily basis and well.. Lisbon is in such a mock-able position xD. Probably not the most appropiate time for that kind of remark is in front of her boss, but when has Jane worried for such things?
Do I need to say that I totally loved Hightower here? I think you portrayed her beautifully, and her calling on Jane's crush on Lisbon? I'm still grinning.
"Jane. I hope you learned a lesson from this," Hightower said in parting.
Oh Jane. It was bound to happen eventually, that someone would blame YOU for something you didn't do. LOL
The ending was awesome. I miss Hightower, and her reaction here was just priceless. You'd never know with those two, so I agree ignorance would be best in this regard lol
;P Jane is so going to be persuaded into handing her the origami swan. I love when Lisbon gets to win situations! So this already has extra brownie points in my book ;)
It was so, so sweet of you to dedicate this to me and I know for a fact I'm not the only one who thinks you can do light/shippy/humor fics, no problem ;D! You should do it more often *nods, nods*
Thank you so much dear :D!
| funnygirlOoObroadwaybaby chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
This was so cuteeee! God, I could just picture sitting there dying of embarrassment! Hahaha! Great job on this :)
| Jisbon4ever chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
LOL :-D This was so funny. I can't stop laughing. Oh Jane, you. Always trying to embarrass Lisbon. I love how in the end she turned the tables on him. HA! I would pay to see Jane blush. :-) Loved the story. You did an excellent job and kept them IC.