Reviews for The long, slow way to Chicago
Mystique84 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
I could see one of two things happening, either the trip goes smooth and they have a stop but being Tesla and being awesome his body only does a little sway, or, my favourite, the train stops suddenly and he and Helen crush into the opposite wall and onto the bed below! HAHHA
Sparky She-Demon chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Mmm. Very interesting! Good job!
DragonAceSg7 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Interesting after-glow, his magnetics.

As Helen gets exactly zero work done for three whole days on the train trip.

Awesomely smexy yet still couply, nicely done.
sg4ever chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
wow this was extremely hot! I really like your writing style, you wrote the characters great. oh and loved the Roadster reference xD

who would've guessed traveling by train could get so interesting? :P
bauerfy chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
this was perfect, i think my brian melted

awesome story and the ending was perfect
melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Hey there,

Well I love trains so this story was fantastic. Even though I've never been on one, I love the romance and old style feel of them and you caught that in this story. It's WONDERFUL truly wonderful.


lastrequest chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Got an image of them both hanging from the ceiling now! lol! nice job :)