Reviews for The Promises We Keep
Guest chapter 7 . 2/2/2018
This angst is really dumb, and has gone on way too long.
Lolsssssssssssss chapter 13 . 7/6/2017
When are you going to make the next chapter
Lololololololol chapter 13 . 6/29/2017
When are you going to make the next chapter
Guest chapter 13 . 2/24/2016
I don't know if you have abandoned this story, but if you can see my review, please update. I lobe the tension, the realisim, how there's no "its all good now" between goku and gohan(because why would that happen) and it looks like a long journey to happiness for gohan. If you could tell us how we skipped from videl not knowing about sayians to her knowing I would love that, as I am very interested.
stryboy chapter 13 . 12/4/2015
Update! Please.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/17/2015
I don't want to seem as if I'm telling you how to write your story but please don't make gohan back to the way he was before cell, let himself stay this way, let Fidel fail her mission in the summary.
Frog hopper chapter 5 . 10/12/2015
So I know this is the sequel but
That dagger that Gohan used
It was the reason he became more saiyan than human right?
Also if that's why who's dagger was it
I can only assume that the dagger is the one used on brolly as a baby is that why Gohan said vegeta wouldn't believe where he found it
Have I missed the context explaining it I read the entire previous story in 3 hours and I keep thinking about it and it's driving me crazy
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 13 . 3/27/2015
IceFire 27 chapter 13 . 3/19/2015
Thank you for letting me know that you had continued this! For not have the chapter beta read it flows well and I'm not sure if I found any errors. Great job and can't wait for the next chapter. Please update sooner rather than later!
the last of the old gods chapter 13 . 3/12/2015
Great story so far i can't wait to read the rest.
Purple Dragon Of The Flames chapter 13 . 3/8/2015
Omg an update! Thank you! Loving it all over again
Guest chapter 13 . 3/8/2015
Lame you are Kiss Ass to canon. Videl should of Won. It is Obvoius you lacking in creavity. I see no difference in plot. Change it!
uchiha999 chapter 13 . 3/7/2015
Great to see you continue this story awesome chapter couldn't have been i have lots of great expectation for the next chapter.
dcp1992 chapter 13 . 3/7/2015
Great chapter! Glad to finally see an update of this. A Disturbed Savior is one of my favorite Fan Fictions and this being it's sequel is up there with it. But man, I didn't know if I'd ever see a chapter, glad I did though. Glad Gohan helped Videl train and also against Spopocitch. Can't wait to how peoples reactions are. Update soon!
maxridelover chapter 13 . 3/7/2015
this was good!
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