Reviews for The Origins of Magic
pushi19 chapter 11 . 4/8
Update please
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 11 . 1/5
I have enjoyed this story.
Hikari Nova chapter 11 . 10/30/2014
when will you revive and update this story it's very interesting
Dreamer22 chapter 5 . 9/26/2014
Interesting story this far, but did you realize that you have Daph who turned 11 in June and Astoria who will turn 11 in August... Which makes the a little over two months apart... Which is impossible due then being sisters
powermachine79 chapter 11 . 7/16/2014
Really great story hope you can continue it soon since i look forward to reading more :)
Guest chapter 10 . 11/24/2013
ASTRALGEEK chapter 11 . 11/7/2013
It's been over a year hurry up!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2013
Your name isn't Jo by any it?
A Fan
Guest chapter 3 . 6/28/2013
While the story itself is a good idea, I find that you need to use a thesaurus ( is a good one) to find some synonyms for "furious", it gets very repetitive after a while.
I would also like to mention that your charcters seem to be unable to control themselves-getting "furious" at everything slightly annoying. Perhaps you should try to calm them, after all, there are many steps between black and white, happy and sad, calm and "furious".
ou chapter 11 . 3/13/2013
please continue
Nomadic1 chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Just discovered and started your story. Interesting concept, I suggest to everyone they find an editor, beta, or just someone to read their stories with fresh eyes. It helps catch errors.

Good luck.
Olaf74 chapter 11 . 8/5/2012
I hope that you may continue it.
Arthorius chapter 11 . 8/3/2012
You should have made sure he is going to continue to rewrite it. It appears from both that site and his FFN site that they storyline The Origins of Magic has been abandon.
Melikalilly chapter 11 . 7/29/2012
i like this story
OSR fanatic chapter 10 . 7/27/2012
Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)
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