Reviews for The Potion Mistress & The Half Blood Prince
Guest chapter 9 . 10/10/2015
Fantastic ! :D
Nazarkovn chapter 58 . 9/17/2015
Good Story
Griffygnus chapter 57 . 1/21/2015
Okay.. now I am gling to use my subpar review skills.

This story was was well written and even if it didnt stray much from canon, it was interesting because of oc's mysterious background. It offered a different perspective from what I am used to narcissa sis, bella rival, aberforth negligent father, albus manipulative uncle, sev friend/lover, lily friend etc. relationships were quite endearing. That said, this fic painted DEs in a very negative the DEs were the kind of rapists this fic potearayedcthem as, they wouldn't have gained much support.

I wish you luck for all your future stories.
Griffygnus chapter 58 . 1/21/2015
I still feel bad for him. After properly reading the whole thing, I can't help but feel that albus used his niece. Whether for good or bad, I am saddened by it.

nice chap
Griffygnus chapter 55 . 1/21/2015
nicely done. The past was interesting
Aberforth not wanting her is a unique twist..
Griffygnus chapter 54 . 1/21/2015
hogwarts was literally her second home
Griffygnus chapter 53 . 1/21/2015
nice chap
Griffygnus chapter 52 . 1/21/2015
albus' actions towards his own niece are not justifiable. not at all
Griffygnus chapter 51 . 1/21/2015
okay chap.
Griffygnus chapter 50 . 1/21/2015
we gain further insight into their lives.. hmm.
Griffygnus chapter 49 . 1/21/2015
too much like canon.. still nice chap.
Griffygnus chapter 48 . 1/21/2015
An advice.. sometimes not telling a reaser that she did this because she loced him so much, is better. Let the reader draw his own conclusions.
Griffygnus chapter 46 . 1/21/2015
hm.. I thought avery would die..
Griffygnus chapter 45 . 1/21/2015
ah...bloody .. I had my suspiscions..

the dialogue is a little... rough. I dont know how to improve it.
Griffygnus chapter 44 . 1/21/2015
lol.. xD

good chap.
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