Reviews for God of Heroes
Mechconstrictor chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
Okay, first off. Capital letters are a must with the first word in a sentence. You really need to fix that.

As for the plot, I feel that they fell in love too fast. Don't think that I like it when it takes 18 chapters for the characters to fall in love but this happened way too fast.
scriller chapter 25 . 11/11/2012
nice story one of the best (:
Be Quiet 1 chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
Her name is spelled Artemis
AngelOfTheMad chapter 21 . 9/17/2012
MINNESOTA FTW! its my birth state (home state is Colorado, lived here 12/13 years of my life)so i'm naturally drawn in by references to MN. VIKINGS FTW!
Guest chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
I like your story. Though, maybe making it a bit more detailed and expressing Percy's and Artemis' thoughts more frequenty would make it flow a little more smoothly. BUT, you're still a kick-a writer.
ryan chapter 18 . 9/7/2012
Annabeth can go fuck herself at least she wouldn't hurt anyone else, or get someone almost killes
ahmadqazi132 chapter 22 . 8/26/2012
what about grover and his forces
EpicExplosions chapter 23 . 8/16/2012
Oh, fuck. That was an epic fail.
EpicExplosions chapter 16 . 8/16/2012
Oh my fucking gods! I'm gonna scream, faint, have a heart attack, or possibly all three.
EpicExplosions chapter 8 . 8/16/2012
Oh, crap. Percy knocked up a godess. And Artemis, for crying out loud!
EpicExplosions chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Aww. Dang it! You guys have all the good names!
Skylar chapter 25 . 8/15/2012
Nice book!
ryan chapter 18 . 8/7/2012
annabeth should be cast into the deepest part of tartarus
Wierdo0101 chapter 25 . 7/14/2012
Plz make a sequel amazing fic!
Wierdo0101 chapter 12 . 7/14/2012
Amazingly great book luv how Artemise and Percy hav a chind! Perfect name.
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