Reviews for Messed Up Bedtime Story
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Nice story!
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
I loved this story so much!
AtomicVendetta chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I thought the story was very amusing! But of course not everything goes exactly as planned. Yuki ALWAYS has to be the aggressive one doesn't he. :D
Kemeda chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
That was hilarious; I love how Yuki interfered with his inappropriateness w
StickWithaPseudonym chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Mama continued. "The prince looked at the piece of paper and said it was... ... ... sigh... crap. And at that moment, the angel was so angry with him, he decided to follow the prince until he admitted he was wrong. Little did the prince and the angel realize that they would fall in love with each other. And upon knowing this they..."

"They fucked each other for hours."

I burst out laughing at that part. Good job XD
WhitCake chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Leather & Whips..

Yuki Leather/Whips Shuichi 3!


Seriously though, cute story! Yuki, with his pottymouth and bluntness makes me giggle. This was perfect in character imo.

Great job.

Now, maybe you should write the story about the the whips..

Haha j/k~!


writer2death chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
this was a hilarious! story! lolz i was bursting out laughing the entire time! a valuable lesson to learn indeed! lolz
kitty tokyo uzumaki chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Lol Poor Riku will forever be scared. Lol loved this~! Yuki is such a bad parent.
valderois chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
This was hilarious! Loved it!
bibbiesparks chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I had to laugh because it was a funny story and I needed it because I was having a bad morning Thank You.

aybe you could make a sequel to it.
Fedski chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
very funny! :D