Reviews for Soul Chess
Original Random Fanfic Fan chapter 66 . 7/9
Even on the 5th or 6th re-read over the years, Nelliel switching to utterly kill mode just because she acknowledged Ichigo as a warrior. Just because her personal code is that (outside of orders) she will only kill warriors, shouldn't really equate to automatically choosing to end everyone she considers a warrior. Really flies in the face of the rest of her philosophy, though maybe that's the point (if I'm remembering her last fight in in the fake city later): exposing early she has just as much killing intent as she used to but just choses to pretend she doesn't. Only real way her switching to blood warrior that "HAS" to kill Ichigo makes any real sense.
aitor.rosell.torralba chapter 63 . 3/29
Just a quick reminder that Chica is perfectly age appropriate to call a teen girl, in fact it is appropriate up to 29 years olds, tho it depends on the person, for example a 26 years old who is a mother would not be a chica, a 28 years old without childs but with a high position in her professional career would no be a chica, but a 29 years old that is childless, not married or in a serious relationship nor very career oriented would absolutely be a chica. Regardless, a teen is 100% a chica, "niña" would be the actual word that would cause that reaction from tatsuki as niña means "female children", "chica" is just Spanish for girl or gal. A teen may react badly to being called niño or niña as it is implying that they are being called a little kid, while chica would be perfectly correct as chica is the word for female teens and young adults, the next word would be "mujer" but to call a teen girl "mujer" would be kinda of weird, "mujer" has a double meaning, it means "woman" but also "wife of someone". Traditionally a girl would be a chica until they get married and by marriage they become a mujer, in the defect of marriage when they give birth. Today it is less clear as lot of women do not marry not have kiddos yet they get a bit too old, pass the young adult phase to be called "chica" so they get called "mujer".

Anyway, you fucked up with your understanding of Spanish and got the meaning of niña and chica reversed.
MaxTrueOmnipotent1 chapter 3 . 11/20/2023
This is bull he would definetly use his geass if needed it is a tool no differrent then his sword.
Hyperman15 chapter 17 . 9/25/2023
So much fire in this chapter that I’m suprised you haven’t been arrested for arson
JustDusty chapter 1 . 9/24/2023
Can anyone in here even write Lelouch properly?
Savior16 chapter 38 . 6/2/2023
wish this as well expanded onto the thousand year war
Tinker Infestation chapter 55 . 3/28/2023
What The Fuck…..
Tinker Infestation chapter 55 . 3/28/2023
That name is very close to being something…
DragonANGL chapter 101 . 1/3/2023
Hmm. That Zaraki going on about being Indestructible, it was a bit Disturbing. For the electrifying routine Susanna did...I was somewhat reminded of Gash Bell, when Kiyomaru does his demonhead dance inside the giant. Just after getting the Instant Answer power post-revival.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/7/2022
Bro Eien Tamashi is me. Like Lelouch was seriously about to spend like 100 more years in Squad 12. Somewhere where he literally cannot become strong at all! What's he gonna do against Aizen at that point? Die from one strike?
Guest chapter 15 . 12/7/2022
Bro I agree with his Zanpakto spirit so hard. By the time Ichigo appears, he still won't have got Bankai. Hell, does he even have his Shikai yet? He'll still be seat like 16 of some random ass squad. Being surpassed by literally everyone... Not a good feeling bro...
Guest chapter 11 . 12/7/2022
At this point, all I'm gonna suggest is:
Take away Lelouch's Zanpakto. If she's gone, then he'll realize he'll never be able to become stronger and wallow in despair as everyone around him dies and he's too powerless to stop it. Like at this point, he's just a smart OC. Nothing to relate him to Lelouch at all. Other than his once-in-a-while remembrance of characters from the past. Like not using his Geass, not acting like a gigachad. All these qualities made up Lelouch. But without them, it's just an OC. Sorry for the rant. Nice story.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/7/2022
As a Lelouch x Kallen shipper, I can confirm that I do indeed believe this is all unresolved sexual tension between Lelouch and Kallen.
DaDragon562 chapter 2 . 11/24/2022
Lelouch talks a bit too arrogantly for a new soul in a new world. He's talking to someone that is equivalent of Clovis in terms of authority but doesn't address him as vice captain at all and talks in a demanding tone while being a weakling. Super awks given how slick Lelouch is.
Curse Of Kings chapter 191 . 10/5/2022
So she's not based off of Shimu, the copy of Nemu Sazeal and Mayuri made in SWA? I'm disappointed...
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