Reviews for Continuing the Cycle
Tony McNucklz chapter 11 . 5/4
this chapter is another example of how unnecessary the "raped bloody and cum-filled" bit was unnecessary. the literal soul-deep trauma and how it was done is volumes more than enough for the hatred of being touched to manifest.
I'm also unable to enjoy a slash story because the entire concept gives me nothing to empathize with. i think it's because to me there's nothing to enjoy about it. 2 guys to me is like parents going at it. hetero and lesbians i get because i understand the appeal of at least one of the participants, whereas 2 dudes is like parents in that there's nothing about what's going on that appeals to me.
there's also an issue with your character associating gay acts as horrific and painful. violation and agony. utterly wrong and tormentous. writing him into ever being interested, even desiring cock play will never be in any way logical with your established history. in fact, i would have expected the past to leave harry utterly distrustful of grown men, latching more onto females because they lack the same learned pain association. even a female relationship would likely be difficult, but one with a man would be utterly nonsensical with your established past in my opinion.
Tony McNucklz chapter 6 . 5/3
I've never read a story where the "my character was shaped by being raped as a child" bit actually made sense as necessary. everything else you put in covers his messed up head, so the "he was raped so bad he couldn't tell if he was leaking blood or cum" bit served more of an insight into the authors proclivities than the character's past. most people that include that tropey cliche, including you, don't seem to realise that they already have plenty of both clear and implied trauma established to explain a damaged mentality. adding rape is just overkill that makes the reader uncomfortable.
Or Noir chapter 10 . 2/14
Sooo not to be rude but *takes out a sharp stick* by my count theres still 6 chapters not typed D:
Poke poke poke
reptoholic chapter 6 . 12/3/2019
I really hope he does not get used I would prefer to see him dark and independent than a pawn
reptoholic chapter 5 . 12/3/2019
KILLLLLL
reptoholic chapter 4 . 12/3/2019
I suggest giving us an Idea of where he is at and the timeline of the story.
reptoholic chapter 3 . 12/3/2019
lol sense of humor
reptoholic chapter 2 . 12/3/2019
Sounds like orochimaru...
reptoholic chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
wow
ChaoticMinds chapter 10 . 10/12/2019
Ohhhhh shit- PLEASE don't tell me... DID VOLDEMORT PLACE ALL HIS HORCRUXES INTO HARRY?! Is THAT what the extra voice in his head is?! -internally freaking out-
TotoroX92 chapter 19 . 10/9/2019
God damn this fic is amazing. I love creature!Harry fics, and insane!Harry fics, so this is hitting all of my buttons. Really hope you come back to it someday.
jaortiz186 chapter 18 . 6/10/2019
Please come back. I miss your stories. I love how Harry goes through these ordeals and his methods of dealing with them. I wonder why no one asked him who are his parents. What happens to the traitor? Will there be more updates? Hope to hear your more of your Storytelling.
Lunanimes chapter 19 . 5/25/2019
I found this story today and I really loved it. I was worried for a bit that Harry would be too Voldemort for my liking, but he is getting better and hasn't killed anyone or tortured anyone. I am so curious about what will happen next. Kabuto is so dead, all Harry has to do is have him look him in the eyes. Jiraya is such an ass, there are clear hints by Harry that trapping him is traumatic and not good for Harry, but he just doesn't care. Wonder if and when Naruto and Harry will properly meet. I hope they get along well. I am glad this story is not abandoned, and even if it takes you 20 years you will continue it. Thank you for writing this story and sharing it.
AR77 chapter 12 . 5/10/2019
Well... I should've expected he wouldn't be nice.
AR77 chapter 13 . 5/10/2019
Harry seems to like honest, sincere people the most. He is definitely nicer and more relaxed around him than anyone else so far.
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