|Reviews for Continuing the Cycle|
| Moonstar66 chapter 19 . 7/7
I am here, even updates do actually take twenty years
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 19 . 5/16
I'm gonna be honest...I'm getting fed up with Harry. He keeps doing stupid things. Like purposely not properly hiding himself or sticking around in the village looking for a safe area instead of popping back to the safe area he already made. On top of that he makes no effort to really fight back and at least maul his attackers for reasons that are feeling more like excuses as the story progresses. His intelligence seems to have decreased because he's still over here trying to kinda remain on the ninjas good side by not being too suspicious when his very existence is too suspicious for them and gets them hostile. Then he basically is trying to be a willing prisoner for them by trying to keep returning to them. I don’t get it. Maybe that's part of his insanity? They want to keep him to exploit him or kill him and he's just standing there like "I know they want to manipulate/use or kill me but I think I should try to stay with them and convince them I mean no harm despite being a real threat"
Like BOI if you don’t take your forked tongue and live in peaceful solitude somewhere!
And I honestly scoffed at him wanting revenge for birdy's death with nothing but what could be a fake name to go by and no actual investigation plans in motion when he still hasn't made any attempts to fulfill his revenge on those 3 ninjas that killed Firescales and almost killed him. If he can wait for revenge for one person he can do so for the other. &Even when he's spying he still purposely disregards the conversation happening when he could be missing useful information and he doesn't even care! Like an unfocused idiot. AUGH!
This turned ranty lol my bad. Harry is just frustrating.
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 18 . 5/16
So...Harry's suddenly turned into an idiot despite the merging that was supposed to help him be able to think better. Great. He's still not mentioning how the ninjas broke the deal 1st or more thoroughly by attacking/trying to kill him. And regardless he no longer wants their help healing which is really what the deal was about. He's assumedly done nothing to improve his body and stamina beside eat while alone. Was ONLY gone a month. Returned for no real reason other than curiosity he didn'tneed to reveal himself for. Kept giving himself away with laughter. Let himself be found. Seemed to have completely forgotten, until talking with one of them, how outclassed he was speed wise and physically, how the demon chakra reacted to him, how his own eats normal charkra. Wouldn't read either of their thoughts when he was calm enough to do so. And for some reason even now, even after being attacked again and caged hes disregarded the different ways he could escape and still make it look only like the teleport they know of. One of they reasons why they made a deal was BECAUSE seals couldn't hold him. Hell, they know of his eyes. He knows how to petrify w/them purposely now and yet didn't. Then there's the fact that he gave Jiraiya insight on how this cage would be better, and seemed to honestly mean it instead of giving false info that still wouldn't work to keep him trapped.
It's all just rubbing me the wrong way. I'm interested in the premise but what is the point? Why is he so fixated on returning to these manipulative trigger happy assholes and why is he still so concerned with keeping damn near everything attack wise hidden? I don't understand insane Harry's motive or desire when he doesn't even really want to be among people and he was perfectly safe and unfindable to them when gone.
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 17 . 5/15
I don't understand why he even thinks he's obligated to return to them? Like the initial deal described was that he's staying to be healed. They stopped healing him. Then he was attacked by their ppl AGAIN. Did Harry not include stipulations about defending himself? About leaving when he was ready or wanting to? He has no obligation to stay in their village, let alone allow them to use him when it's clear to all that they can't contain him and isn't an infiltrator. And why was that Greater Snake sure he wasn't the Lord Snake? Why are the other snakes sure he is? I just wanna know.
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 15 . 5/15
So...Anko is a fuckin idiot and technically to blame for Harry leaving since she's now attacked him twice unprovoked. The 2nd time being infront of the Hokage. Great. I didn't want him staying Konoha anyways.
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 12 . 5/15
OK but can he kill Orochimaru and Danzo tho? Konoha would owe him them. Also when will Harry decide to leave? Still anticipating him going to the summon realm...
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 7 . 5/15
Not me sitting here waiting for someone to call Harry Orochimaru's lost love child or clone lmao.
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 6 . 5/14
Iruka sensei for the win! Are you going to make this version better than the cannon one? I hope so.
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 5 . 5/14
Supportive Sev is best Sev. ~chef's kiss~
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 4 . 5/14
OK so you mean to tell me a group of ninjas aren't doing any fact checking and attack a child with obvious bloodline traits because a group of kids spread rumors about him looking creepy and having a snake. The type of snake that if it HAD actually attacked anyone...they'd be dead. Which they weren't. Why aren't they dead? Harry was really too flustered to react properly and kill the potential enemies he was anticipating? Weak body aside, his magic is fine and his gaze kills. He didn’t even try to kill them with a look! I hope he does later...from the way you described the headband symbol I'm guessing they're grass ninjas.
Also, will he get to go into the summon world and become a boss summons? Is he some kind of snake God? That'd be cool. He'd have Voldemort rolling in his grave from envy lol.
I'll admit I thought that this might be a Harry is Orochimaru retelling of Naruto and I was HERE for that but from the bit of reviews I read b4 this chapter for spoilers that doesn't seem to be the case. And that's fine too of course.
| Kal chapter 19 . 5/11
This is good asf, more pls 33333
| SirchSidhe chapter 19 . 5/6
This was an excellent story. Thanks for sharing it.
| LadyFancy69 chapter 18 . 4/18
Hi, I'm getting back to reading some of my favorite stories and i thought of this one. It's still one of my favorites even after some years after reading it. I hope you will still update it but I understand if you don't. I love how unerving and off his rocker harry is in this. Also the interactions between harry and Jiraiya. Poor Birdy, RIP hope harry takes revenge for you.
| adam110902 chapter 19 . 1/11
| WhiteElfElder chapter 19 . 1/7
I thought Harry's survival was due to a pact with one of the Death gods? When will that come up?