Reviews for Altruism
DGtnsl chapter 5 . 2/10/2016
Well then, that was certainly shocking to Hibari. Though this will force him to evaluate his own feelings regarding Mukuro more thoroughly. Lol, the girls in the class. And poor Kusakabe had to get Hibari after an intense spar between the two strongest guardians. Lol, Mukuro's going to have to work out and train more to get back to where he was.
DGtnsl chapter 2 . 2/10/2016
Well, that was an interesting first day for Mukuro and Hibari. I wonder what high school will be like for the duo. I seriously doubt that Mukuro is going to get in Hibari's way of getting to the top of the high school hierarchy (I keep forgetting that Hibari is still a middle school kid and has heard that rumors about scary high schoolers too). Mukuro's never really been in school, I wonder how he'll cope.
Fun times for Hibari trying to be 'social' and talk stuff out with Mukuro. Turned out to be a good idea though, since they both sort of opened up a bit to each other.
You're doing a good job of developing this story, keeping them in character, and also remembering stuff about their everyday lives that a lot of people don't pay attention to when writing fanfiction. I'm excited to see how things pan out from here!
Sir Butt chapter 3 . 6/23/2015
Your author's note gives me life~ Here I am, reading a serious fic, thinking that the author is the serious type who is very difficult to approach. Then your author's notes are just... askjfbaskljfslf. Can i hug you?

I love stories like these. The characters feel like they're actual human beings with a deep mind instead of 'oh my gosh i think i'm gay' kind of thoughts? ? This sentence sounds weird, but please disregard it.

Their actions, inner thoughts, everything about them feels real, feels 3D. And your language is sooo beautiful and easy to read. I wish I can write like you.

Oh gosh. Don't even get me started on the events happening in this fic. I swear everything is so perfect!

Thank you for writing!
CrisTPST chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
I like this story.
PuppetPrince chapter 6 . 12/9/2012
sakimidare chapter 6 . 5/3/2012
"... most likely going to end up trying to kill each other in ten minutes, but they're both fine with that just so long as they're both strong enough that they'll never actually succeed in doing so."

Alright, so this lines were the perfect description for these two.

And oh, Mukuro, always teasing poor girls.

Also, Tsuna really has the worst luck, doesn't he? xDDD
CoffeeJailbreak chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
gah, I haven't read through all 300 chapters of reborn yet, but does mukuro get this nice?

I can understand if it's all because he likes Hibari...but I don't think Mukuro would ever *hope* that you won't kill him, because he'll slaughter you first. 8/10
skymaze chapter 6 . 1/7/2012
Hey Forte.

So, how would I describe your writing?

Elegant, maybe. It's very elegant. And that pretty much sums it up.

I don't know what else to say but this was one amazing story.
6918 chapter 6 . 9/13/2011
Wow.. I can't believe that I've read your fic twice and didn't review it! Shame on me!

This is one of the few fics that are close to my heart. Yes, I do add a lot of stories to favourites, but the one I reviewed were something special that gave me so much more... beautiful days while creating and recreating the scenes from the fics that I truly admire.

You know, I find it less usual for me to remember your story months after I read it. I usually tend to like and remember some fic for a short period of time, due to the fact that I read a lot of 6918. Hmm.. strange thing, right? Hehe, that means it's a story that was permanently printed to my memory.

I hope you'll keep writing beautiful.. :-)
Radioactivesnail chapter 6 . 9/6/2011
I am aware that this story is complete, so you'll be glad to know I'm reviewing simply to let you know I love it! (: And add on to the review count because man, this deserves so many more. On a pretty random note, I love it that the story ended where it did, instead of droning on and on about their challenges as a couple or whatnot.

Write on! (With your other stories I guess)
Sakuma Umi chapter 6 . 7/9/2011
I loved your story 3 :3 its really good :)
hiyonnn chapter 6 . 6/10/2011
This fic is so freaking good. I really love these 6 chapters. THANK YOU. And i have to say that the Mukuro and Hibari here is perfect for me. XD
Suzuno Akaya chapter 6 . 6/8/2011
Eeh! It's end already?

Uhm, so sweet! At the point where Hibari found Mukuro and tell him -sort of- that he like Mukuro presence, at least tolerate enough because they erm-doing that. A-anyway, I do love if you write that M-rated scene... Write 1869 again, please?

feelnopain chapter 6 . 6/4/2011
awwww...that's so cute!i guess you really had captured the (possible?)feelings and thoughts of those two,and that leaves me a very deep impression.i like the plotting as to how that beautiful emotion was born.i'm not quite fond of 1869 (i'm i die hard 1827!),but this were just a few fics that i can accept in par with my favourite couple;)
BLEACHER SHO chapter 6 . 5/29/2011
I LOoOoOoOoVED YOUR STORRY IT FLET GREAT READING 0 and don't worry they weren't vrey ooc Wactuwaly they flet like they were the thougts and acts of the real characters\\\3/


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