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Dixie Chic chapter 1 . 11/5/2011

my best friend's sister has an imaginary friend named Miyuku

are you her?

or was it Miyuki...
socio-intellectual chapter 5 . 9/18/2011

Ama Sohma

Im ash's current age.

Ima trainier that has 1 more badge than ash.

I look exactly lik Amu 4rom shugo chara except i hv white highlights. :D

Update sooon.

OMNISENSE95 chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Okay, brfore I do anything else let me say this: what exactly does Team Universe plan to do with these heroes? I mean, it just seems a little conceited. Anyway, I will submit an OC now:

Name:Alex Purered



Looks:Short blonde hair, brown eyes, and an outfit similar to the outfit of the Male protagonist of Pokemon Black and Pokemon White.

Description/Personality:Has a strong sense of justice, and is a leader of a resistance force against Team Universe, being one of the few people aware of it's formation.


Lucario (Shiny)



Tyranitar (Shiny)

LoveLoverGrl chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Hmmm it was okay.
LoveLoverGrl chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
OMNISENSE95 chapter 4 . 9/5/2011
Well, you didn't let Drew die, so it is obvious you won't do the same for Gary. Also, the "P" stands for "pokemon", right? One more thing, are you open to OC submission?
socio-intellectual chapter 4 . 9/5/2011

randomninja2398 chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
This story is good as, 10 times better than mine.

Your plot line is good and I like the idea that Professor oak, Brock and Max are being Cupid to the 8 of them

anyways update soon :)
OMNISENSE95 chapter 3 . 9/2/2011
Okay, I realized you did change some things, but I would really appreciate it if Iris and Cilan showed up when they arrive at this new region, please. Oh, and I really like this story.
OMNISENSE95 chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
The way you state that, it implies that numerous characters who appeared previously in the series will appear in this fic. Also, a little hint; Meowth was fired from Team Rocket for some horrendous failure and began traveling with Ash, Iris, and Cilan (the two latter I still insist you add to the cast of protagonists as some surprise add-ons.)during the Unova adventure. Just thought you should know. Oh, and is everyone going to start fresh, keeping only thier signature pokemon, or wil the exixsting parties remain?
OMNISENSE95 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Tell me, are Iris and Cilan going to be in this?
socio-intellectual chapter 3 . 8/26/2011
OMFG! I lik AshxDawn parring better! AND DAT OLD MAN IS A REAL SUMTHIN! Nice chappie though!
LoveLoverGrl chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
Nice xD
LoveLoverGrl chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
Hey nice story xD continue? :3
Miyuku-chan chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
I was able to tell you through my phone! I promise I eill try to find a way to update!
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