Reviews for Ultimate AdventureDISCONTINUEDMayRewriteOnANewAcc |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ohmygod! my best friend's sister has an imaginary friend named Miyuku are you her? or was it Miyuki... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Ama Sohma Im ash's current age. Ima trainier that has 1 more badge than ash. I look exactly lik Amu 4rom shugo chara except i hv white highlights. :D Update sooon. -Ama |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, brfore I do anything else let me say this: what exactly does Team Universe plan to do with these heroes? I mean, it just seems a little conceited. Anyway, I will submit an OC now: Name:Alex Purered Class:Coordinater/Trainer Age:17 Looks:Short blonde hair, brown eyes, and an outfit similar to the outfit of the Male protagonist of Pokemon Black and Pokemon White. Description/Personality:Has a strong sense of justice, and is a leader of a resistance force against Team Universe, being one of the few people aware of it's formation. Party:Emboar Lucario (Shiny) Reuniclus Braviary Tyranitar (Shiny) Salamance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm it was okay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, you didn't let Drew die, so it is obvious you won't do the same for Gary. Also, the "P" stands for "pokemon", right? One more thing, are you open to OC submission? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG! I WANT PEARLSHIPPING SOOOOOOO BAD! UPDATE SOOOON! -Ama |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is good as, 10 times better than mine. Your plot line is good and I like the idea that Professor oak, Brock and Max are being Cupid to the 8 of them anyways update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I realized you did change some things, but I would really appreciate it if Iris and Cilan showed up when they arrive at this new region, please. Oh, and I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way you state that, it implies that numerous characters who appeared previously in the series will appear in this fic. Also, a little hint; Meowth was fired from Team Rocket for some horrendous failure and began traveling with Ash, Iris, and Cilan (the two latter I still insist you add to the cast of protagonists as some surprise add-ons.)during the Unova adventure. Just thought you should know. Oh, and is everyone going to start fresh, keeping only thier signature pokemon, or wil the exixsting parties remain? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tell me, are Iris and Cilan going to be in this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG! I lik AshxDawn parring better! AND DAT OLD MAN IS A REAL SUMTHIN! Nice chappie though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey nice story xD continue? :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was able to tell you through my phone! I promise I eill try to find a way to update! |