|Reviews for what the parents never see|
| myst77 chapter 11 . 2/12
I am assuming English is not your first language. You need a beta for correcting all the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. And try to go a little slow. Try to dev
| Puppiesssss chapter 11 . 5/3/2014
this ended so suddenly... i mean... Them having sex at last and confessing their love to each other should have been the climax right? or like the climax of the second half of the story. Shouldn't Tezaku say something like "i'll erase all signs of ryoga from your body and replace it with my own or something..." welllll whatever... this story is still great however! but ermmmmm it would be even greaterrrr if you added like a short chapter 12 to say like how they told their friends and family and such... i can already picture how heartwarming it would be 3
| Puppiesssss chapter 10 . 5/3/2014
why did he get a nosebleed? it's not like he saw tezuka naked... 3
| kurie-tibiti chapter 10 . 7/14/2013
manga form sounds very exciting. Being able to get to see the facial expressions.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/11/2013
Is it odd that I read this story and the story you previewed here one after the other and loved both?
| lilbit1016 chapter 11 . 6/1/2013
| Sebby-chan3000 chapter 11 . 4/6/2013
| maiakahana244 chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
perfect ending. I don't hate Ryoga but i also don't like him either
| xxxKaixxx chapter 11 . 5/25/2012
I read the fic in one shot so I didn't comment until now. Generally, I enjoyed the fic but forgive me for saying this but perhaps you should check for punctuation and spelling mistakes? Sorry for being anal but things like your vs you're, there vs their/they're and lack of capitalisation really gets to me... I hope you'll take this as constructive feedback instead of an insult :)
On a brighter note, I actually read your other fic first and I think you've improved loads so good job!
| AnjoRemix chapter 11 . 3/16/2012
ROFL i still wonder how Ryoga feels though would be awesome if there was a sequel about Ryoga and why he behaved that way lol maybe a one shot could explain it but oh well lol still love it 3
| micheruSan chapter 11 . 11/7/2011
| seshomaru94 chapter 11 . 8/25/2011
awesome story I loved it i'm happy that ryoma and Tezuka finally admit they liked each other took them long enogh. this was the best way to end my B day :) loved the story
| seshomaru94 chapter 7 . 8/24/2011
OMG I so want to keep reading to bad i have school in the morning ugh LOVE the story, oh by the way you spelled come instead of cum don't worry it happened to me to sense they both sound the same.
| Celestial Eclissi-Chan chapter 11 . 8/9/2011
I loved the story. especally the ending, so sweet.
| haechan435 chapter 11 . 7/1/2011
Aw poor Ryoma, it's a good thing there's no school on Sunday cause I dunno how he'd make it all sore like that! ;D Ryoga's such a jerk coming off all regretful like that before he runs off. Anyway, I love this story! Please email me a link to that manga when it's up! :D I'm looking forward to your next story for these two!