Wow. Seriously, I never expected you to write this kind of fanfic oO. I actually thought you would stop describing the yaoi part after they pull down their clothes...
But it was an awesome fanfic. I enjoyed mostly that it was based on your abridged series. That made it funnier in a few parts :D I can imagine that Yu-Gi-Oh! fans who don't know your youtube channel got confused when you mentioned the evil council for example.
All in all that fanfic was pretty awesome. I enjoyed reading it, even though I doubt you are going to read this review.
Greetings from one of your biggest fans 3

MiniLaw

I am not gay, but I NEEDED to see this couple do something. I am now complete. Thanks Little Kuriboh! Your awesome man!

Amazing writing. I enjoyed the mix of emotions throughout the story, how you set up certain events, the characterization of Marik and Bakara. Overall perfect. The end made me laugh a bit, too. Great work.

I came here because Marik and Bakura told me to.

(Just kidding. This is funny. LOL)

God be with us

it's so into character

Super friggin amazing. Always wanted them to... You should totally write more! But make it more graphic with them... And have Bakura do something to Marik...

I admit I'm somewhat disgusted with myself for reading this, because reading sex scenes in just about anything tends to make me uncomfortable (because I'm a prude)

But this was so satisfying. Moreover, while your clever jokes and such make it pretty clear that you're a good writer, I didn't expect you to be so good with tugging the heartstrings in actual prose. I found myself cursing at my computer in Chapter 7 that if this entire fic was just a dream I was going to toss it out a window. I swear, the ending nearly made me cry

I never actually read this and I can't believe I waited so long. It really surprised me, a weird mix of parody and heartfelt. I know you're a good script writer, but I had no idea you were such a good prose writer too. Haha, wow. Amazing job.

(Meanwhile, Ryou finally figured out how to make an iPod appear in his soul room. But with only the audiofile of Bananaphone to listen to, he decides to instead grumble resignedly about safe sex and STD prevention, still trying to pick the lock)
Well that was an adventure and a half.
I'm afraid that last scene with the butts got a li'l too intense for me, so I just skipped that bit to the end. This story is pretty freakin' great! I can't really think of much to say other than DAAAAAANG. I mean, the way you used the medium of text to your advantage? Brilliant! If something about the Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged universe were to be written for charity, I don't know if this would be the story I'd think of, but dammed if it's not a great one!

(Meanwhile, Ryou finally managed to make headphones appear in his soul room. But he's dismayed when he realizes he also needs to plug the headphones into something)
The entirety of this chapter was just me going WHAT THE FUCK the whole time. Because WHAT THE FUCK. Is... is this canon? I suppose it could be, but canon is such a loose entity anyway.
...Loose canon. I didn't even mean to do that. Anywho, that's what I call a well-written sex scene. And those are really difficult to do right! Impressive. Usually sex scenes feel very awkward because they're focused on what's physically happening. But the point of a book is to be inside the character's mind, and that's what this scene focuses on. Still awkward, of course, but that's because sex is very weird.

(Meanwhile, Ryou's ears perk up while reading, thinking he might have heard somebody talking about him. But what are the odds of him being mentioned two chapters in a row?)
*deep breath in and out* PHEW. Almost done!

(Meanwhi- HOLY SHIT RYOU ACTUALLY SHOWED UP!? I seriously didn't expect THAT! Usually he's just shoved aside with probably one line explaining that Bakura got a body of his own, if he's lucky)
Wow
This story is... so much better than I thought it would be. I know that sounds mean, but I'm afraid I jumped to conclusions when it came to your writing, Mr. Kuriboh. This is really one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Thank you.
I'll spend another chapter geeking out about the transition from a visual and auditory medium and how brilliantly this story downplays the missing elements and uses the medium of the written word to its advantage.

(Meanwhile, Ryou is facepalming at Florence's decision "Even I bloody well know you can't escape friendship around here, and I don't even have friends!")

(Meanwhile, Ryou is trying to make lock-picks appear in his soul room- perhaps outside he won't be able to hear Florence's thoughts)
...Hey. Wait. Is Bakura just an older version of Killua from Hunter X Hunter? HOLY CRAP HE IS! He's got the same weirdly skinny limbs, same pale-as-fuck skin, same deadly skills... How 'bout that.
Dayyyyyum.
You could probably power a steam train with all the steaminess of this chapter. Dang.
...Is this going to be Let's Torture Bakura Because it's Fucking Hilarious Hour?
Because I'm down with that.