Reviews for Slytherin family
The Other World chapter 3 . 6/9/2014
Nice story. I like Harry raising Tom stories, specially when it improves Tom's character - how could it not? Though do remember that, like you mentioned at the end of this chapter, Tom did become a cold hearted, cold and ruthless mass murderer and so there IS something violent in his nature. Thus even a good upbringing wouldn't be able to curb it completely. the most that can be done is that Tom is brought up to detest violence and cruelty, making him repress his... violent tendencies
Hope you update soon :)
Guest chapter 3 . 2/26/2014
Ahhh it is lovely! I do hope you are not abandoning this plot bunny.
Make war not love. war is fun chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
interesting story so far
Kuraihikaru chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Wait... If Slytherins can not eliminate others in their line... then how did Voldemort kill Lily?
LupinCriss chapter 3 . 2/16/2013
Please update! This is one of the few good stories i could find.
MzMilo chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
nice twist
MaiWishes chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
Oh lol u haven't updated since last may, for some reason I thought it was this may p slacker, what's the point in posting then seriously
MaiWishes chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
Are u going to make Tom not so bad a child as we thought then? I'd be disappointed, since I like Tom the way he is, but u justify it pretty well since u bring up a very good point, Harry seen little tom from Dumbledores POV so what we kno about him could be skewed.
Anyway, this could be a great story, I hope u continue. Harry adopts Tom are my favorite but the best ones are always doomed to only have a few chapters :( Could u tell me if u have any plans to start updating regularly? Byes
MaiWishes chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I Likeee Harry's personality, very mature, u bring out his slytherin side without it seeming ooc immediately. I have always thought Harry may have a gryffindor heart and thats wonderful but what he needs is for it to be tempered in slytherin house. There are three things I wasn't sure about though. I don't think mrs cole is another, worse petunia, and it makes Tom to much of an innocent victim. Tom cuts Harry off asking the exact question Harry was about to answer, that felt like you just copied it from the book without it actually fitting into the dialogue, and makes Tom look a little silly, unlike when Tom and Dumbledore meet. Have Harry say Good evening or something then get cut off. Third, why call Harry Sergius? I feel it would keep their relationship more real if Harry kept his name and help me still think of him as being Harry.
Peace and plz reply
magicanimegurl chapter 3 . 11/28/2012
WOW... I like it... if you ever update... I'll be waiting
forTheLoveOfHades chapter 3 . 9/15/2012
cool
cyiusblack chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
upATE SOON
JezebelSlytherin chapter 3 . 8/5/2012
Great story . keep Writting .
Andy Elladora Black chapter 3 . 6/25/2012
Update!
Vicky Ravenwooch chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
Wow! It is amazing! You did a great work! Why haven't you updated? You should update more! Is, possibly, one of the best fics I have read. Thanks for sharing your story :D
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