|Reviews for First Blood|
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Oh, this is so tragic. It's really sad seeing these two still as best friends (it's my wedding- have a cookie! XD) standing by each other, encouraging and comforting. Assuring each other that they are good and will always remain friends. Scared that it might not be the case. It hurts when we know just how much this nightmare will come true.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Because some things are inevitable, and Fate can be a cruel b*tch.
| angelrock444 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
| Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Really good. Kind of scary.
Poor Sozin, I hope he can learn from this and make the right choice. If he dreads this outcome for a long time, he won't let it happen...right? ...Or will he forget what he had dreamed over the years?
| ShirouHokuto chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
... oh, sadness. ;o; Beautifully written.
| TrisakAminawn chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Alternate history, is my reading. Because even in the dialect of 'inevitable dream prophecies which frequently prompt themselves' I have trouble seeing Sozin tormented by recurring dreams of firey conquest and killing Roku and then setting out to conquer the world for its own good.
Could happen. With a sufficiently unclear dream and him (and Roku) being sufficiently dumb. But it read to me much more as a supernatural intervention to stop Evil Sozin from happening. Heh. Maybe I'm just optimistic.
His guards looking the other way when he goes to visit Roku at night was funny. For some reason, I can see his father approaching him at some point and going, 'look, it's dangerous for you to keep doing that, so how about we give your friend Roku some rooms in the palace? You think he'd go for that?'
That Roku's room was messier and the way he mumbled in his sleep were nice pieces of characterization. Possibly-unintentionally set up a Young Roku-Sokka link in my mind. And made me smile.
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
...T.T WOW! That is awesome and gorgeous! *U* WOW! Rock on! Absolutely love this! Rock on! *U* Gosh, even thinking of this...! Man, it makes me think of so many ways things could have been different! T.T Rock on!
| quintilis chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
"Blood in the streets and Roku dead at his feet."
Great line! Good work.
| GirlWaterShaman chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Ooh, scary! poor sozin...