|Reviews for Heart of a Ghost|
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I wasn't sure about the style at first, as the first few paragraphs seemed a little too casual (especially when compared to the rest of your series), but it definitely picked up as it went along. Orakio and Laya, despite never really being seen, are such key characters in the game and I really enjoyed your interpretation of their history. Your story makes perfect sense when it comes to explaining the "evil" role Rulakir played in the game; it reminded me a little of Lassic's progression in PSI.
The family aspect was portrayed well between the three of them (Orakio, Laya, and Rulakir) and their wives/children/siblings; it made the later scenes with Gwyn and Adan more poignant and significant. (Assuming you're following the events of the game, it's a little depressing to think about what must be coming up next...)