Reviews for Darkness
13DiamondPython13 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
THANK YOU! Guys, Clive is I believe 7 YEARS older than Flora. Flora and Luke (Yay!) are only two years apart. Remember he was called Legal because he was a legal young adult.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I like the idea of Flora and Clive being together, but your story was really impressive.

Truthfully, I could see Clive as kind of critical when he was pretending to be Luke. I think this is a great interpretation of how he would've acted towards her, even if it's anti-Flora/Clive.
proffesah-angel chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
i wish I was in a dark tunnel with clive...but your right, clivexflora is stupid. Just because he kidnappe her to lure layton to his fortress! what idiots...good story :)
Laguzgirl chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I don't like Clive and Flora together at all either. I don't get why people do like them together. It's as if people think "Oh em gee, every character must be paired with someone!" and that thought is crap. So I liked this fic. v Good job making it.