|Reviews for The Lost|
| ellie chapter 6 . 9/14/2012
I absolutely adore this story, it has just the right amount of hurt/comfort and I still haven't finished reading it but I think it will definitely go into my top 10 Merlin fics ever!
| Epsilon Scorpii chapter 13 . 9/4/2012
Awesome realistic story. Loved it! :-)
| meh chapter 7 . 9/3/2012
"There are many bad things that can happen to defenseless Merlins gamboling about, alone in the woods."
i dont know what it is, but something about that sentence makes me smile.
| Artemis no Himitsu chapter 13 . 9/3/2012
Glorious fic; you're quite good at Merlin-whumpage! I thnk I'll favorite you.
| Artemis no Himitsu chapter 8 . 9/2/2012
lol, Voting is just to make you lot feel better about yourselves. I love it.
| KatTheCatInTheHat chapter 13 . 8/30/2012
I haven't had time to write a review for this until now, reading it nonstop as I have, and I'd just like to say bravo!
BRAVOOOOOO! There, shouted it to the world! Now everyone knows how great your fic is. And it was, it really was! Gah, if only I could write a fic of this quality! (but no, the only Merlin fic I've got going is 1000 words and going nowhere, woops).
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/23/2012
'yes because no one ever breaks into the vaults' rotfl priceless
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/21/2012
Freya appearing at the end- MARVELOUS! :D I'm totally on the Merthur fanclub... but when I read fics like this where Arthur's too much of a jerk and a prat and an asshole, I just can't help but hate him a bit... and then, those times I don't want him for Merlin at all! *grr* So, I'm definitely happy, sort of giddy about Freya's appearance there at the end- with such a 'difficult' task, too. But... if Merlin can't trust his first and only love, then who can he trust? ;)
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
If I were Merlin, I'd have already committed suicide... or asked anyone, anyone at all to just slit my throat for me than to suffer more and hurt others around me and not just myself. LOL ...well, I'm pretty pessimistic. XD
| Nicconicco chapter 13 . 8/17/2012
okay. here I am. in flesh and blood. well, okay. not really. but here I am. I've secretly (with a few favourites here and there) read most of your Merlin fan fics. and I must say, you are pretty darn awesome at catching their characters. It's almost as if you got everyone's humour in you. Gwaine's, Merlin's, Arthur's. spectacular. you're really talented with making them come alive. I saw, most, of this story happening inside my head and it was epic, heartbreaking, funny, and incredibly sad. you did throw some hilarious parts in there as well (mostly thanks to Gwaine and Merlin's sarcasm etc), which means you pretty much wrote a new episode to the series. I would not have been disappointed if they actually showed it. it's that good.
I may sound sick and completely mental, but I love these kinds of fics, where my favourite character, and one true love, gets injured, close to death, scarred for life and tortured. I dunno why,(it's the same with Harry Potter, I love the fics where Draco is sad and hurt, I wouldn't even mind him dying) but I guess it's because.. no I don't know, I guess I want to feel sorry for them, I want to cry for them and I want to hold them and hugging them and telling them everything will be okay. I've lost count on the times I've cried my eyes out to Merlin. I've watched the episodes more than I can remember watching anything, and I cry even more each time I see it. even before the sad things happen, probably because I know what will come and I'm like a scared child watching a horror movie for the first time: "Don't go in there, DON'T GO IN THERE!" you know? Now take your raised eyebrow down before it gets permanent. I'm weird and I know it. no judging. I guess it's the Slytherin in me, *sigh*. anyway.
I'm a bit sad it's over really. I really enjoyed reading it. I even wished I was at home at my computer reading it, instead of being outside in the sun in Stockholm. I've been thinking about this story for some time now. when I'm not reading it and when I'm away, I often find myself thinking about it. how sorry I feel for Merlin. How much I love Gwaine's humour. How much I hoped Freya wouldn't appear (I really don't know why but I'm not a big fan of the Merlin/Freya thing. I mean, she's gorgeous and all, and I guess Merlin and her would fit perfectly together, but I just can't see it.. I guess I'm a too big Merlin/Arthur bromance fan to ever consider a girl coming in between them (It's obvious Gwen is just there to be a façade to the kingdom or something). I could totally see Gwaine coming between them (Gwaine/Merlin would be awesome) thanks to you. I mean I love the humour he got in the series, but you just makes him better. and the whole; 'Merlin keeping and eye on Arthur so Gwaine has to keep and eye on Merlin' thing, brilliant, true and awesome. well, I guess I should stop writing this essay before I've written a book for you to read..
Brilliant Job, Brilliant Story, Brilliant Writing, Brilliant Everything. (Let's just say Brilliant is the best word to describe something good with okay? okay.)
I really cannot wait to read more Merlin work from you, more drabbles(They kept me awake, while trying to laugh as quietly as I could without waking the whole house up, while I had to work in the morning(Taking care of kids...), so thank you for that(I'm referring to the laughs, not keeping me awake, unless you feel good about that, then thank you for that as well))
KEEP. IT. UP!
| EKdark chapter 13 . 8/4/2012
This was such a good fic! I usually read stories that ship somebody, but I'm glad I decided to read this one anyway!
I love how you portrayed everyone, especially Gwaine! :)
| Amalthia chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
I really enjoyed your story. :)
| Lilybet chapter 13 . 7/30/2012
Really good story, I liked the pacing and the way it unfolded. A couple of minor grammar/spelling mistakes but other than that very well told. Your style is very readable. LB
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/27/2012
Love your stories, you really should write for the show; you seem to have the Merlin universe down pat. Great job with flushing out Gwayne's and Percevil's personalities, that added to the depth of the story. Merlin suffering from post-tramatic stress disorder and having Arthur, Gwen, Gaius,and the knights there to help Merlin try to recover from his ordeal and then take out Morgana and Morgause all the while under Uther's rule is a fantastic story, and the work of a very sick mind. I loved it! I must be a real sicko to so have enjoyed Merlin going through such a horrible thing, yes,I am one sick puppy. I'm not even sure if Julian or Johnny could have come up with a story as wonderful as this, but here's hoping the do in Season 5. With Julian's interview at Comic Con 2012 he said do to budget restrictions that they have 3-4 scripts each season that they don't use. It just makes me drool like an infant at the thought that there are finished Merlin scripts out there that I haven't had the chance to watch or read. Oh the agony!
| WindStar chapter 13 . 7/24/2012
I really liked this story. It had a good arc that was well written and well spun. There were a few characterization flaws - like where Lancelot seemed more like the show's Gwaine and vice versa, but I think given the circumstances they could be accepted. Other than that I fine production indeed.