Reviews for The Lost
Mind Holds The Key chapter 9 . 12/7/2011
I'm so drawn into this fic it's ridiculous. Also, something that kinda nudged at me from this chapter. It's around the time that they mention Kilgarrah, and Arthur tries to keep matters near Camelot rather then out in the forest for Merlin's sake and safety, but the sentence seems to be cut off-

"And," Arthur continued, cutting him off, "Based off of how you're


It doesn't end with an indication that he's been cut off. It just seems that the sentence is sliced out. And the way Merlin responds doesn't entirely make sense, so I imagine the last few words from Arthur response are missing.

I could be wrong though.

Either way, can't stop reading, this is good.
Terikel chapter 13 . 12/2/2011
Awesomeness. I love Merlin whump, and this was certainly one of the best stories I've read so far.

Loved all the characters, you got them all down perfectly. I think my favourite moment was when Arthur told his story and we got to know that he didn't send Merlin away because he wanted to get rid of him but for his own protection. Didn't see that coming.

Also really liked all the interactions between the characters. The Arthur/Merlin bromance was epic, of course, but so was the Gwaine/Merlin one. I think I grew to love the knight even more.

The plot was of course epic. I normally don't really like amnesia stories, but you pulled it off really well, only ever revealing some memories, just enough to make it impossible to stop reading. The showdown was epic, too.

Just loved the whole of it, you're really an awesome writer. )

Keep up the good work.
Lemin chapter 13 . 11/7/2011
Hells Yes. Perfect ending to a perfect story, loved Percival's little anecdote :3
LordYsHarker chapter 5 . 11/2/2011
I would really like to comment on the (amazingly awesome) contents of this chapter however I do not think I ought to use expletives so I'm pretty much screwed.

But seriously like SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
LordYsHarker chapter 3 . 11/2/2011
Random Review Alert!

Sorry but just reading this and so in awe of the sheer awesomeness emanating from screen all I can manage in terms of proper review is "Gah! This is AMAZING!"

now to continue on
loz chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
this story is really good! its brill! i read it, like, 4 times! xxx
AndIllWriteYouATragedy chapter 13 . 10/20/2011
You will never even begin to understand how much I love this story. That's all I can say.
ajunkboat chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
epic. just... awesome xD this whole fic is crazy good. and i really enjoyed the way you wrote it, not like a typical story with beginning, middle, end, but starting in the middle and slowly revealing more about the start. made it alot more interesting to read :)

also, i LOVED that bit a few chapters back where percival comforts merlin, and talks about his brother. that was beautiful! made me tear up lol but yes, when i read that bit, i remember making a mental note to applaud that bit of awesomeness :)

there were many other bits (which i forget now) that i was going to especially comment on... oh! gwaine was generally awesome, love your portrayal of him :)

um.. yeah, there was more but i forget, so just in general, great fic, it was a pleasure to read :)
Lilynette chapter 13 . 10/16/2011
I'm so glad I found this story! It was amazing, and I'm really happy that I gave it a shot. This is going on the favs, and I'm off to see your other fanfics!
Loopstagirl chapter 13 . 10/11/2011
Wow! I've just read this entire thing in one sitting, it is beyond unbelievably fantastic!
miskris95 chapter 13 . 10/10/2011
aaaaawwwww i love a happy ending :D
poplip chapter 13 . 10/10/2011
This is one of the most brilliant fics I've ever read. Keep it up!
mudstalker chapter 13 . 10/9/2011
This has been an excellent story! I've had it on my computer and have been reading it for weeks now. I'm so sad it's over... I'm going to check out your other stories!
Merlingurl chapter 4 . 10/8/2011
oooh, that gave me chills! great job, you really are a good writer. if you ever wrote an actual Merlin series, i'd read it! thanks for giving me something intersting to do!
A-Cola-Product chapter 13 . 10/7/2011
FREYA! *squeals*

Sorry, fangirl moment.

I finally finished reading this. And I loved it! Very good. :D
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