Reviews for The Lost
Smoochynose chapter 13 . 10/5/2011
I loved the endish bit. And sorry for quoting your own words back at you but ...

"Gwaine's lake thing," said Merlin, standing and leaving, "I need a horse, I – why didn't I think of it? The lake."

and

"Er," said Gwaine, "I would like to point out that I am in no way responsible if Merlin steals a horse and drowns."

Loved it. Absolutely brilliant.
Luna Marisol chapter 13 . 10/5/2011
Oh my gosh this story was brilliant! :D

I LOVED your characterizations of the Knights - they were quite wonderful with the comic timing and the way you had them act, either in a dramatic situation or those melancholy moments - Percival talking about his little brother was both heartbraking and lovely. And what a suspensive idea, to have Merlin be in Arthur's room one moment, and then all crazyness braking loose the next. It defenitely had me wanting to read more! But the highlight was totally the Knights (I'm a Camelot Knights-fan ;)and was very pleased when they interacted with eachother, and ofcourse Gwaine's comic timing and the silly stuff that came out of his mouth :D

It was a nice plot, and it all went together well.

So thankyou for a wondeful story, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

~ M
A-Cola-Product chapter 3 . 10/5/2011
"Can you even imagine how badly he'd react to finding out that we know about the magic?"

At this line, I literally said "Oh snap!"

Anyways, I love this story. I feel so bad Merlin. Poor guy.
Kami011 chapter 13 . 10/4/2011
i...just... love you.

really.

that was fantastic.
godsdaughter77 chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
Great story! Thanks for sharing! :)
Sydelle Rein chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
I knew he was going to Freya! Yay! I love hurt Merlin-Freya scenes. Though we didn't see much of it...But oh well.

I can't believe it's OVER! What do I do now? Well, I suppose that's actually a fairly easy answer, now. I'LL GO WATCH SEASON FOUR! I'm so excited. :)

~Syd
nekodreamstealer chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
Goods gods. A truly epic ending to a truly epic story.
justwalkingdown chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
I LOVE this story! And all your Merlin fics they're brilliant :D You're a very talented writer. I especially like how you explore the relationship between Arthur and Merlin while keeping it cannon :) AND WHEN IS MERLIN ON TODAY?
Iaveina chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! :D

I've been struggling to find completed, chaptered stories that I haven't read before and this was a surprise! I love it! :D

NaMoWriMoing - my username's Iaveina :D

Enjoy Merlin tonight!
DancingMagpie chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
Brilliant ending to an excellent story! Your writing is, as ever, magnificent. I really liked the appearance of Freya at the end: the bit about Merlin laughing (and Arthur's observation that it was a rare thing) broke my heart a little. And I love your Gwaine - "I would like to point out that I am in no way responsible if Merlin steals a horse and drowns." :D
Whirlwind421 chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
Bittersweet ending. Good story...if not rather sad! I liked it!
Eris Dea Disaccordo chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
What? It's (finally) FINISHED? ))

You wound it down pretty well, and the conclusion was very realistic. I don't think things could've been called even either.

Well done! (As usual!)

Keep it up!

~E
lilahri chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
Brilliant. Loved every word. And that's all I have to say on the matter.

Merlin tomorrow! (I squeal like a little girl every time I think about it... Tee hee)

~lilah
MamzelleHermy chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
No it's finished ? Nooooooooooooo ! I'm sad, so so so sad ! I think that that story really is one of my favorite ! It is so awsome, marvelous, fabulous, glorious ! I don't event have words to describe your genius !

I'm already waiting for some new stories !
animeloveramy chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
thats so sweetly adoreable...

i love it. so cute, so well written and a brilleint way to end it
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