Reviews for Undesirable
Day1Directioner chapter 30 . 1/4/2013
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU :o UPDATE! please :)
43v3rgone chapter 30 . 11/8/2012
Update please!
HeadlessSanity chapter 30 . 7/24/2012
Is this fanfic finished?
Ripplerose chapter 28 . 9/12/2011
THIS STORY ROCKS! keep updating k? can't wait to read more!
THE ZEEBUH BEIN' LAZY chapter 28 . 9/2/2011
This is a cool chapter. I love how you didn't go overboard on the description, most authors do. Though this chapter was a tad rushed, I liked it, your doing well! -

BOW DOWN TO THE ZEEBRA KING!
YubelChan chapter 27 . 8/13/2011
Lmao! XD Amu is dense~ To a point. :3

XD Goo Nagihiko goo! :D Go Temari on his cosplaying ass! XDD
THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 27 . 8/12/2011
HA! a funny chapter! poor kirishima, he's related to a psyco

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Chico and Maya chapter 27 . 8/12/2011
please write more!
kibago chapter 27 . 8/12/2011
great chapter c:

but i've noticed something...

Kirishima is the last name and Fuyuki is the first name. You've mixed them up. o.o did you do that on purpose or did you not know...?

but other than that, i can't wait for the next chapter. c:
Rolling StargazeR chapter 27 . 8/12/2011
LOL temari all da way! XD

I'm LOVING this!
Rosey-Chan chapter 26 . 8/4/2011
All I can say is EPIC! D Please continue this story...I love it! UDATE SOON! THANKIES! D
THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 26 . 8/2/2011
OOH

Saaya's busted~~ :P

What's happening next? I mean, saaya is not such a threat but saaya with an illusionist X-chara? That spells trouble

Update soon_

AND FOR PETES SAKE MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER! *snarl*

heehee, sorry, I really enjoy this fic, its too short for me

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THE ZEEBRA KING chapter 25 . 8/1/2011
SWEET

Hurry up guys and write more reviews so the chapters are longer!

This one really set the stage for a great chapter, so I'll stop bugging you and read it

Just know that this was worth the wait :)

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kibago chapter 25 . 8/1/2011
THIS CHAPTER.

IT BRINGS MY HOPES UP FOR THE NEXT ONE. XD

UPDATE IT SOON. C:
TheTARDISat221B chapter 24 . 7/7/2011
Oooo i really like this fic! Wow saaya is really evil O.o update soon plz :)
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