Reviews for Julia's Broken Heart
WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
This one really was beautiful, especially how it ended. I love the image Rinoa and Julia have of both Squall and Laguna.
Niqsta chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Well this was cute. Not sure if it fits exactly into the gameplay, but it's sorta believable.

The only two things I wasn't very fond of was Laguna's emotional involvement, it is quite clear that his feelings for Julia had decreased after he met Raine. His words when Kiros mentions Julia marring the General, 'Her happiness is what is important' are neutral and gives the notion that the love he had for her turned into respect and care. As for Raine, you could down right tell he loved her. He did change his entire lifestyle for her and had the courage to marry her.

The other thing was Julia's prescence at the end was a bit weird seeing as she died in a car crash in Deling City and the field where Rinoa is supposed to find Squall, is the Centra fields just outside the orphanage. So Julia wouldn't have been buried there. It's nice thematically, but in line with the game, she wouldn't have a place there.

Otherwise, this was a cute ficlet. But you might want to change the font. Fanfic has been retarded and underlined eveything.

-Niqsta