Reviews for Unpredicted
boss ninja 21 chapter 12 . 12/28/2017
i don't know what to cheer on percy and artemis or percy and Annabeth
boss ninja 21 chapter 2 . 12/28/2017
i like it
TridentBolt chapter 5 . 6/22/2017
good i liked the plot
TridentBolt chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
i will give this chapter good but you got to slow down
TridentBolt chapter 2 . 6/22/2017
good i like how he was turned into a good once again excellent writing but this chapter was so short i could not give you a better rating
TridentBolt chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
very very good keep it up i will comment on every chapter and tell if it is good great awesome needs help really needs help or horrible . i have also told some one that their fan fiction was horrible so i am not joking . i do this to shape you and to make you into a better author. but trust me your fan fiction caught eye and only few have done that.
LightningSlayer chapter 28 . 4/16/2017
ChaosDeath chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
Guest chapter 15 . 3/9/2017
These cliffhangers arre killing me even if I only need to press next
Guest chapter 13 . 3/9/2017
I effing love the twins
Guest chapter 10 . 3/9/2017
Will he become a gerbil

I am serious
Guest chapter 9 . 3/9/2017
I swear on the Styx that I haven't read ahead...
I think that artemis Will go with percy. Percy will be seduced by lamia and arty will get jealous
Caroline557 chapter 15 . 1/19/2017
Dont like how Percy is a god and he's gettin threats from the stolls... He should be the one threatening them not to spill anything but thats just my opinion
Awesome chapter 13 . 12/8/2016
Scipio Marcellus chapter 28 . 12/2/2016
Can you please update
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