Reviews for Unpredicted
Guest chapter 28 . 10h
How can you not write another chapter, you can't end it like that
ReaLifeTomoki chapter 28 . 6/18
Please update soon.
Defective Wolf chapter 25 . 4/7
Great Story but why is Percy portrayed to be so weak in the books he could have done it easily, with help of some kind of reminder of where his heart lies to combat lamias seductive/deception abilities, to me the whole training thing was pointless, yes it helped further the plot in terms of relationships n all but you could have just had Percy ambushed by multiple major monsters such as lamia the nemean lion and the Minotaur backed with a few empousa and hellhounds, have him fight well but ultimately succumb to the combined forces, so that he can have a 1v1 with lamia but having Percy heavily injured and to further the plot he could succeed in killing lamia but due to his injuries he is left near death, Artemis flashes to his location and gets him back to Olympus, creating drama and furthering their relationship in the same sweet and romantic fashion, something along the lines of this would add more drama and action making the story much more interesting, in your story however Percy is reduced to the power levels of a newly discovered demigod or even a mortal but don't take this as hate just a suggestion and constructive feedback and as i said great story i live and breath pairing such as pertimis and perlia, keep it up.(its a bit of a mouthful,sorry)
chickenugets chapter 28 . 3/21
plz update soon. really good so far. ty.
Kevin chapter 10 . 3/3
Hes either going to go to tarturus or hes gonna marry artemis
Illuzunist chapter 28 . 2/25
Hello, this is a good story, and I really hope that you did not send it to the scrap heap. Please continue this story, if you remember any of the plot ideas you had for it, as you stopped uploading for this story in 2012 and it is now almost 4 years. If you don't, I understand, as you must be busy, but if you can, then could you please find it in you to update this story, because you left it on a cliffhanger that seems to point to something happened to Artemis, such as Lamia disn't die and killed her, or something along those lines.
On another note, if you would like, I would like to apply as the beta reader for this story, if you are willing. Best wishes

-Illuzunist
Reaper24 chapter 28 . 2/17
Can't wait for more
the-exiled-realm chapter 15 . 12/23/2015
Shit got real
Guest chapter 28 . 12/12/2015
good story
what happens chapter 28 . 12/11/2015
I am DYING! Pls continue! I love the story.
Dean Johnson chapter 12 . 12/10/2015
pooror Annie
Guest chapter 10 . 11/5/2015
Oooh I dont kare
Guest chapter 9 . 11/5/2015
I love luch too
Guest chapter 9 . 11/5/2015
Ok...
Paul chapter 28 . 9/24/2015
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