Reviews for A little bit of Hell
dannisez chapter 10 . 10/14/2016
Oh. My. God...
Just loved it. Thanks for a fantastic read
12122016 chapter 10 . 6/23/2009
Wow. I read this through the night and I bookmarked it so I could finish it this morning. I loved it! Great story!
VintageNicky chapter 7 . 11/5/2008
Jareths brother makes me laugh! Love this story, very cute and very well written! Now Ill just read the rest XD
DaydreamingPenguin chapter 10 . 9/12/2007
I've just finished this amazing peice of work, and I must say, you have a wonderful way with words. If you ever need someone in a pinch to read over your work, or to help with grammar or words, I would be glad to help. If not, keep up the wonderful work!

sweetbabby33 chapter 10 . 6/27/2006
Lovely,love everyting you wrote~~!Hope to hear from you soon. :)
BlackMagicAngel chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
Sorry im reviewing before i read because i know the song its one of my favorites... well i like it anyway... Its called "The Game" by Disturbed... I dont know if anyone has already submitted that but i kinda wanted too haha... anyway I'm expecting great things so i will give a real review later
Forevermore33 chapter 10 . 10/8/2005
Great story! The ballad really turned out well. I hope you right more in the Labyrinth genre.
lyn chapter 10 . 10/7/2004
write more
mouseisi cant be assed to sign in chapter 9 . 4/14/2004
i'm so sorry, but i do not like the twins. I dont know why, but i hate having children in the stories that seem really fond of jareth. it doesnt seem to be his character! I hated the little girl, she was always hugging everyone, and shouting. the boy was ok, i suppose. But i didnt like the whole finishing sentences. Sorry, but maybe you could make another story, becasue you are good at wrting. I cant really say your stroy was a downfall bcoz of the children because i am writing one and it has a little girl in it and shes his neice. Jareth and Her dont get along. Could ya read it andf give me a few pointers? I have writers block! well, good story. love mouseisi
mouseisi cant be assed to sign in chapter 10 . 4/14/2004
akuma-river chapter 10 . 3/25/2004
Great Story.
NowDefunctSorry chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Lovely, I loved it. Only a few spelling errors (spelling, the bane of my existance -.-') perhaps if you had a beta? *waves* I'm hopeless I know. Anyway, LOVELY.
JadedxVampire21 chapter 10 . 3/9/2004
That was really sweet...But i don't get the whole Ivory Tower thing...Aw, you said 'end', but i want another chapter! *pout* Oh well...
Ana Morales chapter 10 . 2/29/2004
Very nice! [claps] Brava! However, you may want to go through and really proofread this thing hardcore. There are a lot of turns of phrase that are ever so slightly the spelling, too. Keep it up!
Bonnie chapter 10 . 12/7/2003
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