|Reviews for Billy's Freedom|
| Kendra chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
I know this story is about two years old(your fanfic) but I recently read the book last week after some recommendations and I fell in love with it! Bibbit was my favorite character, I cried when he killed himself, I'm still recovering from it. Probably because I can relate to the speech problem, but I don't stutter, I just have a speech impediment with the R sound!
Anyway, I loved your one-shot! And if I still had my account, I don't anymore considering I had my idea stolen and was called loser and retard on here a lot, I would have put this as a favorite! :)
| TsunamiTides chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
hmm, interesting look on Billy, this book was great, but I felt so bad for Billy!
| TheWeasleyBoys chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
I have only one word for this...and that is BEAUTIFUL. Thank you for doing so well on capturing my two most favorite characters in the entire story, and in a one-shot, no less!
| ManderzG8 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I really liked how you coveyed and imagined Billy's talk with McMurphy would have went. You should change it a little bit though because Billy was not admitted, he went by choice and can leave when he wants to. Maybe Billy could say he was to much of a coward to stand up to his mother and that he is scared to make it alone? This is a very good POV though, good job.
| orchidxxx chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
i liked it, they were very in character and you managed to keep McMurphy as the caring con-man that we all love while still involving the novels main theme. i think it could be improved by maybe by making it from either billy's or McMurphy's point of view and going more into their feeling and thoughts behind the simple aspect of what they say, as we only get to see the Chief's point of view in the novel. but this was still very well done :D