Reviews for The Severus He Saved
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 10 . 2/20/2010
I adore good ol' Snape whump. And this had pleanty for sure. :) I adore it. I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 9 . 2/20/2010
Uh-oh. Leaving to answer Voldy's call, Snape? That spells T-R-O-U-B-L-E. With all captails. This isn't good. What's going happen to him? Coughwhumpcough. And what's Sirius up too? I can't wait to find out! :D
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 8 . 2/20/2010
_smirks_ That was awesome. :D
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 7 . 2/20/2010
Wow, I'm actually pretty glad Minerva isn't Snape's mother. _grimces_ I like Snape/Minerva and that would be really weird for me. Great chapter! I do love where this story is going. :D
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 6 . 2/20/2010
WOW! That was so cute. Poor Sev. And also, Lupin and Sirius? Love it. I adore Sirius a lot after Snape and Lupin comes in a close third. I really hoped they would be in here. -looks pleased- See, ya next chapter! :D
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 5 . 2/20/2010
Oh, wow. That was smooth planning, Dumbledore. Good acting too. I cna't wait to see what Snape thinks of this...;D
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 4 . 2/20/2010
How in the world did he survive if Dumbledore says he's dead. Unless Dumbledore is faking he's dead so...-eyes thin- Oh, now that might be it...I can't wait to see what happens to little Sev now! Great chapter btw!
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
Must read more...;)-frantically goes to next chapter-
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 2 . 2/20/2010
Oh my. Poor Severus. That would be terrible, thinking you were unwanted and all that, then finding out that your father was right there and you didn't know. _hugs an annoyed looking Snape_ This story has me on the edge of my seat. :D
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Seems pretty good. I do adore Severus and always love a good story about him. This seems to be one. Can't wait for more. :D
suchrandomness chapter 14 . 6/12/2009
I loved Sirius' reaction when Hermione tole him that Snape was Dumbledore's son... brilliant stuff
suchrandomness chapter 12 . 6/12/2009
Love this story, excellent how Severus teases Minerva 'Yeah right, and I'm the Headmaster's son.' that had me laughing when you wrote that she didn't know how to react.
CodenameConundrum22 chapter 15 . 8/2/2008
i absolutely loved the story! it was well written and creative! awesome!
dlargecat chapter 15 . 5/20/2008
So it seems I've never reviewed this story, and I really should, considering this is my third time reading it. I really enjoy this story a lot. I like the concept and I think you did a good job on all the characterizations. Thank you for posting it. If you ever want to continue the sequel, I'll be waiting to read it. :)
Sean chapter 15 . 5/15/2008
Excellent story idea, good sense of drama, poignant scenes are well written. You've done a great job with the relationship between Albus and Severus and Minerva. I'm very pleased that I found the story, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your fic.

If you have time, you need to get a beta or proofreader to help with the spelling and word choice. fan. or groups./group/Beta_Unlimited/ or .uk/ would be helpful in helping you choose a beta reader.

Here are some examples from the last 2 chapters

ch 14 Voldemort's followers had begun to eye Dumbledore wearily. [warily] [weary is tired, wary is cautious]

ch 15 Malfoy ranked [raked] his short nails across his desktop and didn’t say


ch 15 Points were dolled [doled] out to the Slytherins

xh 15 Then Malfoy took careful air [aim] and threw the bat wing

ch 15 I was always weary of kindness, [wary]

ch 15 You will loose [lose]some, we all do
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