|Reviews for The Severus He Saved|
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 10 . 2/20/2010
I adore good ol' Snape whump. And this had pleanty for sure. :) I adore it. I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 9 . 2/20/2010
Uh-oh. Leaving to answer Voldy's call, Snape? That spells T-R-O-U-B-L-E. With all captails. This isn't good. What's going happen to him? Coughwhumpcough. And what's Sirius up too? I can't wait to find out! :D
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 8 . 2/20/2010
_smirks_ That was awesome. :D
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 7 . 2/20/2010
Wow, I'm actually pretty glad Minerva isn't Snape's mother. _grimces_ I like Snape/Minerva and that would be really weird for me. Great chapter! I do love where this story is going. :D
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 6 . 2/20/2010
WOW! That was so cute. Poor Sev. And also, Lupin and Sirius? Love it. I adore Sirius a lot after Snape and Lupin comes in a close third. I really hoped they would be in here. -looks pleased- See, ya next chapter! :D
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 5 . 2/20/2010
Oh, wow. That was smooth planning, Dumbledore. Good acting too. I cna't wait to see what Snape thinks of this...;D
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 4 . 2/20/2010
How in the world did he survive if Dumbledore says he's dead. Unless Dumbledore is faking he's dead so...-eyes thin- Oh, now that might be it...I can't wait to see what happens to little Sev now! Great chapter btw!
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
Must read more...;)-frantically goes to next chapter-
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 2 . 2/20/2010
Oh my. Poor Severus. That would be terrible, thinking you were unwanted and all that, then finding out that your father was right there and you didn't know. _hugs an annoyed looking Snape_ This story has me on the edge of my seat. :D
| Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Seems pretty good. I do adore Severus and always love a good story about him. This seems to be one. Can't wait for more. :D
| suchrandomness chapter 14 . 6/12/2009
I loved Sirius' reaction when Hermione tole him that Snape was Dumbledore's son... brilliant stuff
| suchrandomness chapter 12 . 6/12/2009
Love this story, excellent how Severus teases Minerva 'Yeah right, and I'm the Headmaster's son.' that had me laughing when you wrote that she didn't know how to react.
| CodenameConundrum22 chapter 15 . 8/2/2008
i absolutely loved the story! it was well written and creative! awesome!
| dlargecat chapter 15 . 5/20/2008
So it seems I've never reviewed this story, and I really should, considering this is my third time reading it. I really enjoy this story a lot. I like the concept and I think you did a good job on all the characterizations. Thank you for posting it. If you ever want to continue the sequel, I'll be waiting to read it. :)
| Sean chapter 15 . 5/15/2008
Excellent story idea, good sense of drama, poignant scenes are well written. You've done a great job with the relationship between Albus and Severus and Minerva. I'm very pleased that I found the story, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your fic.
If you have time, you need to get a beta or proofreader to help with the spelling and word choice. fan. or groups./group/Beta_Unlimited/ or .uk/ would be helpful in helping you choose a beta reader.
Here are some examples from the last 2 chapters
ch 14 Voldemort's followers had begun to eye Dumbledore wearily. [warily] [weary is tired, wary is cautious]
ch 15 Malfoy ranked [raked] his short nails across his desktop and didn’t say
ch 15 Points were dolled [doled] out to the Slytherins
xh 15 Then Malfoy took careful air [aim] and threw the bat wing
ch 15 I was always weary of kindness, [wary]
ch 15 You will loose [lose]some, we all do