Reviews for Hearts Afraid Of Breaking
Ithiliel the Chosen One chapter 84 . 2/3/2016
At first I have to admid I didn't read everything... (I left exactly 6 chapters out but will read them soon) Most of all I loved the stories about Anne Boleyn and Elizabeth and Robert. I love them so terribly much and there is just not enough fanfiction about them...
AllegoriesInMediasRes chapter 84 . 12/16/2015
I loved how you examined the parallels between these two women who were so different and yet shared much in common. Mary and Jane were both extremely religious, and had Jane held on to the Crown, she probably would have devoted herself to making her country faithful to the reformed religion- not as fanatical as Mary, but in a similar vein. While I feel like Jane's parents' "abusiveness" has been exaggerated over the centuries to paint her as a tragic martyr, both in terms of severity and time period relevancy, they were both pawns caught up one way or another in their parents' political and religious ambitions at similar ages.

The only thing I wanted to point out is that Mary actually wanted to spare Jane, and it was her advisors who pushed her to remove the potential Protestant figurehead. Even then, Mary held off on executing Jane for several months until her father led the rebellion in her name, and even then she tried to postpone the execution as long as possible by getting Jane to relent. A small detail but very important, especially as it shows that Mary was not the bloody tyrant she is often made out to be.
autumnrose2010 chapter 84 . 11/12/2015
This is a very good chapter but it makes me really hate Philip of Spain and, to a lesser degree, Queen Mary as well. I find it ironic that as it turned out, their marriage wasn't really a happy one and he didn't really love her. Henry is to blame also, of course, for Mary's situation, but if it's really true that she valued marriage to Philip and the resulting power over true justice, then I'm actually glad she didn't get the child with Philip that she wanted so badly. Karma bites doesn't it...
lili chapter 77 . 6/10/2015
awwwwwww... "and i think it is time you stopped being second to everyone else in this world" broke my heart. there are tears after she says "perhaps, then, i shall have to settle for being your sister too" sad...
HiIminthecorner1991 chapter 52 . 5/26/2015
This would make a brilliant story. I loved this one shot :D
autumnrose2010 chapter 83 . 5/22/2015
Poor Amy! Sad chapter but very well written. This could have actually been the way it happened...thanks so much for this chapter, it's been far too long since I found a really good Bess/Robin fic to read!
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 83 . 5/22/2015
My god those two are so obvious it almost hurts even if Elizabeth swore she would never marry, I guess her heart still belonged to Robert besides her country! Poor Amy I really feel bad for her! So well written, the song is brilliant with the text! Again a master piece!
Athenais Penelope Clemence chapter 82 . 1/22/2014
Oh how beautiful! I liked it very much!
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 82 . 1/18/2014
Wow that was amazing, terrible and utterly genius! I loved the relationship between George and Elizabeth! If only they could have had their happiness!

As always my deepest compliments on your story
autumnrose2010 chapter 81 . 1/15/2014
Wow, that was really different...good thing the child turned out normal...
HermioneandMarcus chapter 81 . 1/15/2014
Excellent chapter update and I can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 81 . 1/15/2014
Wow... mm brilliant... passionate... insane... amazing! Together in life and death

As always my deepest compliments on your story
Asiraya chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
"I Want a Mom" by Cindy Lauper would fit the young Elizabeth very much :D
Nessiexo chapter 78 . 9/15/2013
I liked this, it was sweet. And I loved the lyrics with it as well, it was all lovely!
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 80 . 9/12/2013
Interesting turn of events! Wasn't it rumoured that it was Anne Neville and Richard III who made sure the two princes disappeared?

As always my deepest compliments on your story
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