Reviews for Watching AVPM
QuillDream19725 chapter 3 . 1/20
Yes I love lauren Lopez! She did fabulous as draco! Good writing!
ravendor92 chapter 27 . 1/15
The toon town to the toons is a reference from who framed roger rabbit.
ravendor92 chapter 14 . 1/14
Ron and draco are related. Draco's mother is a black whose family history goes back to someone marrying a weasley.
Jenny chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
It was awful, I hated this. You haven't captured the character's personalities at all, and your grammar is atrocious.
The marauders21 chapter 32 . 11/18/2014
Alwaysharrypotter12 chapter 2 . 9/14/2014
Luv this fic! Xxxx
Bree chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Hermione's middle name is jean not jane (sorry for being nitpicky don't hate me!) but other than that absolute perfection love it!
Toby860 chapter 27 . 8/4/2014
im not sure if you know this and I hope you do but the toon town left to the toons is a reference to who framed roger rabbit.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/30/2014
harry is related to draco because his mother is a black and harrys grandmother was a black. plus harry became the head of the noble and most ancient hose of black which gives him some black relation
IAmSiriuslyADemigod chapter 27 . 3/20/2014
I love this, AVPM is amazing! And you've done it amazingly. Toon town going to the toons is a reference to who framed roger rabbit? It's a film that my dad has seen. Basically cartoons are real and theres a place called toon town but some of the toons come to the normal world because roger rabbit has been framed for killing someone, I can't remember who. It ends when they catch the guy who really killed the guy and they find the will and it says that toon town goes to the toons. I really love this story, you really get the characters reactions really well!
LunaEvanna Longbottom chapter 32 . 2/18/2014
I just want you to know that I hate stories that aren't cannon, but I couldn't seem to stop reading this one. I actually see Cho and Ron as a great couple and I can even get on board with Dramione, but only for you. The only thing I won't get over is the fact that Lucius giggled and Snape rolled his hips.
The-Original-Lucky13 chapter 27 . 2/15/2014
Love this story and cant wait to read sequel, also in an earlier chapter you asked about shes all that its a good movie you should see it its from the 90s it stars Freddie Prince Jr, and the reference the that toon town goes to the toons isn't from space jam its from the movie who framed Rodger rabbit.
cloverski9114 chapter 16 . 1/16/2014
I don't know if someone has pointed it out yet, but Sally Hemming was a black slave that was owned by Thomas Jefferson and became his mistress who then gave birth to several of Jefferson's illegitimate children and because there mother was black and a slave were seen and treated as property rather than people. Before Jefferson died he freed Sally and her children from their position as slaves. Jefferson' s wife, Martha(who hated that her husband had a mistress and illegitimate children) did not inform Sally of their freedom until after Jefferson's death.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/6/2014
Great effort in this! You wrote a lot more than many others, but Draco and Hermione could never end up together, because

1. He hates and taunts her best friend
2. He is racist and makes fun of her all the time ( Ron defends her a lot )
3. He has never shown anything but hate and contempt when she is involved
4. He was a death eater
If i continued i would be here all day, and Ron would never go for Cho because she is very serious and needs a lot of attention, and he could never deal with that, sorry but i really don't think you got the characters right. especially Tom, Snape, and Dumbledore. Great effort though!
Here's7to6never5growing4up chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
Love it. Sign me up for that petition
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