Reviews for The dark ages
Bokkun chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Okay... Don't ask how I found this story, but I did! So let's see, Um...

Name: Xander Fletcher

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Built/Body: Slim, no fighting ability whatsoever.

Hair & Eyes: Silver hair that's sticks up and out. Purple eyes that are always happy looking.

Clothes: A buttoned shirt that's kept open that shows off his chest area, red jeans and red sneakers. He will button up his shirt if in really cold areas.

Accessories: None

Personality: Let's see...Happy, most of the time. He tries as hard as he can to make his firends smile, and he always has a shoulder for anyone to cry on. He is easy going and will not get mad unless one of his friends is in trouble.

History: He has never met his father which has left a slight mark. His mother and him moved to new york as a means of getting away from the past.

Hobbies: None.

Location:New York

Role:Digidestined

Crest: Darkness, Light or Friendship

Digimon: Mikemon

Stages: Nyaromon(In training) Mikemon(Champion) That's pretty much it. Mikemon don't go past Champ and don't have a rookie form, odd isn't it?

Personality: Mikemon is wild, as in sugar/caffine rush twent four seven. He takes anything that a friend does as a joke and play many jokes himself. He is also a big softy for any female, if they need help then Mikemon will give it, if he can.

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet?: Mikemon was running around in a forest one day and hapopened to notice a portal. He jumped into it and ended up in the human world. Milkmon ran into Xander who wanted to help the poor cat and that was how they became pals.

Relationship: No thanks.

Now I realise that in this first chapter you said you'd take a bit of time to update...it's mean longer then a year...well bye.
XTheBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
ooohh sounds cool. Okay here's mine:

Name: Claire Katlie Williams

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Buit/Body: She has pale skin but also has a slight athletic build from being in baseball and runs during the summer. She's 5'5''

Hair & Eyes: Wavy, mahogany colored hair that goes down to the middle of her back but she wears it in a ponytail a lot. Her eyes are chocolate brown colored.

Clothes: A camafloge colored tank top, black cargo pants and green sneakers.

Accessories: Other than her hair holder that she usually wears, she has a necklace with a locket

Personality: She doesn't really talk much when she's alone and usually keeps a poker face on her. When she's around a lot of people however she acts happy and cheerful and jokes around in front of others to keep them in a good mood.

History: Claire has always been the good girl of the family. She's the the oldest out of the 2 other siblings of her family. She's had problems with being by herself mainly because she gets bored and impatient. She has her parents and her siblings to keep her company.

Hobbies: She's in baseball (the best pitcher in her school) and loves being theater (has won many awards and has done lots of school plays)

Location: New York

Role: Digidestined

Crest: Liberty, Loyalty, Persistance

Digimon: Renamon

Stages: Relemon-Viximon-Renamon-Kiubimon-Taomon-Sakuyamon (You can decide if you want Renamon to go all the way to Sakuyamon. You can get her just up to the ultimate level if ya want )

Personality: Renamon is usually calm when she's by herself but has a hot temper when others bother her. She doesn't really understand much about her partner due to Claire's weird personality.

Relationship: Most likely (you can pair her up with anyone, I don't mind)

You like? No? Just PM me if you have any questions.
XTheBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
ooohh sounds cool. Okay here's mine:

Name: Claire Katlie Williams

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Buit/Body: She has pale skin but also has a slight athletic build from being in baseball and runs during the summer. She's 5'5''

Hair & Eyes: Wavy, mahogany colored hair that goes down to the middle of her back but she wears it in a ponytail a lot. Her eyes are chocolate brown colored.

Clothes: A camafloge colored tank top, black cargo pants and green sneakers.

Accessories: Other than her hair holder that she usually wears, she has a necklace with a locket

Personality: She doesn't really talk much when she's alone and usually keeps a poker face on her. When she's around a lot of people however she acts happy and cheerful and jokes around in front of others to keep them in a good mood.

History: Claire has always been the good girl of the family. She's the the oldest out of the 2 other siblings of her family. She's had problems with being by herself mainly because she gets bored and impatient. She has her parents and her siblings to keep her company.

Hobbies: She's in baseball (the best pitcher in her school) and loves being theater (has won many awards and has done lots of school plays)

Location: New York

Role: Digidestined

Crest: Liberty, Loyalty, Persistance

Digimon: Renamon

Stages: Relemon-Viximon-Renamon-Kiubimon-Taomon-Sakuyamon (You can decide if you want Renamon to go all the way to Sakuyamon. You can get her just up to the ultimate level if ya want )

Personality: Renamon is usually calm when she's by herself but has a hot temper when others bother her. She doesn't really understand much about her partner due to Claire's weird personality.

Relationship: Most likely (you can pair her up with anyone, I don't mind)

You like? No? Just PM me if you have any questions.
Evilness chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
My god, OC story get reviews fast. but still.

Name: Xavier Masters, he will make you call him Mister. X

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Built/Body: Tall and athletic

Hair & Eyes: Black wild hair, red eyes

Clothes: Black fancy shoes, Black trouers, Blue dress shirt, Red bow-tie, White gloves and Black top hat.

Accessories: A white plastic mask with red eyes and mouth.

Personality: he has a smugness unmatched throughout the whole digiworld. but he can show other emotions like, rage. even if he is evil there is still some good in there.

History: after his whole family died he became very distant, and a bit insane.

Hobbies: Poker, (really good) and rock climbing (master climber).

Location: he ended up in the digital world last year, in a hotter part of the digital world.

Role: Villain, later on Digidestined

Crest: Darkness, Chaos and Hatred

Digimon: Terriermon

Stages:Gummymon,Terriermon,Gargomon,DarkRapidon,BlackMegaGargomon

Personality: a very caring nature. he hopes for the day that Xavier will join the digidestined, but he will still do what ever Xavier says. when he's not worrying about Xavier, he has a dark personality, and he loves to make people think twice.

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet?: Xavier fell into the digital-world one day when sufing the net. he would have died out there, if he didn't meet Garomon, who saved his life from a army of Impmons. they went arpund the digital world, till Garomon lost his form and turned back into Terriermon.

Relationship: Yes
James95 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
1 OC

Name: Christopher Nightingale

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Built/Body: pale skin, 6'3 and quite muscular

Hair & Eyes: Sapphire blue eyes with ear length slightly shaggy black hair

Clothes: Light blue tshirt with a white zip up bodywarmer, ankle length black jeans and black converses.

Accessories: Black fingerless gloves, Itouch and earphones

Personality: This guy may seem scary but he's really a baby panda. Shy, a little nervous but really loveable. He may be smart but if he's convinced he would be loyal to a person no matter what. He may lose it at times and can become too attached to a person

History: Chris was born in England but when his dad was transferred to the CIA his family had to move. At his school girls love him but a lot of guys hate him because of his accent and the fact that he doesn't like athletics apart from swimming and fencing. One time it got so bad that someone stabbed him. He recovered and the guy was put in juvi but he's worried that that guy will come for him when he gets out

Hobbies: Cooking, singing, YuGiOh, duel masters, playing the DS and DOA games and fencing.

Location: New York. Lives with his mother and father (both 39) and his twelve year old sister Gwen. He has a cat called Millie who is a manx tortoise shell

Role: Digidestined but maybe an unknowing villain like the other villains make him think that the digidestined are evil

Crest: Love, sincerity or kindness

Digimon: Impmon

Stages: Kiimon, Yaamon, Impmon, Devimon, Neodevimon, Beelzemon

Personality: Impmon is the descendent of the demon lord Beelzemon but instead of being a psycho he hates being evil and just wants to be good by helping his tamer. This doesn't stop him from pranking others. He likes watching TV, especially romcoms and likes coke and chips wrapped in newspaper.

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet? Chris is walking across a bridge when he sees Impmon about to jump, he pulls him away and asks him why he tried to commit suicide. Impmon replied by saying that he'd always be seen as the son of a killer and he doesn't want to be a burden. But that day Chris told him that Impmon wouldn't solve anything by ending his life and that just because his father's evil doesn't mean he should be and that he should lead his own life. It was then that they became partners.

Relationship: A digidestined girl who tries to make sure no one plays tricks on him and is pretty protective

Thanks.
Taffy-Chan93 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Name: Kira Yamanaka

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Built/Body: Kira haves pale ivory skin with a long hourglass shaped body for eating healthy foods and the average height of 5’6”

Hair & Eyes: She has layered black short hair in an A-Line Hairstyle with side bangs on her right side. Her narrowed eyes are colored dark brown.

Clothes: Kira wears a dark purple vest with a black tank top underneath, blue jean shorts over her black tights and dark purple boots.

Accessories (Optional): She tends to wear a pale red mini scarf around her left forearm, and pale red fingerless gloves.

Personality: Kira is a very silent and self-reserved girl who does not choose to speak out her personal thoughts. Although these negative qualities need to be worked on for her social life, she is very intelligent and always informs people about anything they question on; yes, even stupid questions. She is the quickest when it comes to observing her surroundings and situations, also being talented when it comes to strategize plans. This smart girl always thinks ahead and gets prepared for the unexpected. Don’t let her stoic appearance fool you because she knows how to get out struggling situations.

Although some smart people takes their knowledge as an advantage against adversaries or other people they don’t like, Kira is not the type to take her intelligence for granted. She prefers sharing her knowledge with others so she can be in any assistance to those who really need help.

Kira tries her best to be social person and add in a little humor, but every time she does, it either makes the situation awkward or they do not understand her. This makes her lower her self esteem and thinks she shouldn’t even bother. Either way, Kira is the best at expressing concern and support towards those she is close to.

History: Born in Tokyo, Japan, Kira lived under the same roof with her wealthy business parents, and her active, sporty young brother. She was blessed with knowledge from her father and feminine looks from her mother. Although Kira and her brother barely spent time with their parents, their personal maid always took care of them. This Yamanaka girl was always considered to be a nerd and get bullied because she was short compared to an average Japanese child and wore glasses during kindergarten.

Reaching to the fifth grade, the only true friend she had was one of the most popular girls in school named Mitsuki, giving her a make-over and advise her to wear contact lens instead. Ever since then, Kira began to look more beautiful and gained even more friends, until she learned the harsh truth that they were taking advantage of her because of her new beauty and knowledge to get good grades at class. This caused Kira to avoid people around her, never trusting anyone ever again. Now, whenever she speaks, her voice will sound very monotone and soft as if she was a humanoid robot.

Hobbies: studying, reading novels, singing to herself, researching for information, cooking Japanese cuisines and taking private kendo lessons.

Location: Tokyo, Japan

Role: Digidestined

Crest: Knowledge, Reliability

Digimon: Lunamon

Stages: Moonmon; Lunamon; Lekismon; Crescemon; Dianamon

Personality: Lunamon seems to be somewhat like the opposite of Kira’s personality, except she’s very shy and timid at the beginning. She could be friendly and warm up to others who are nice back, but one of her flaws is having a innocent, gullible personality. When it comes to fighting, this rabbit-shaped Digimon becomes a coward and hides behind her partner, always asking what to do before she actually does anything. The longer Lunamon stayed with Kira, the more she begins to understand that she is not comfortable with talking to people so she tries her best to do whatever it takes to support her partner and grow a deeper bond of friendship between the two.

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet? In the night of the full moon, Kira would be leaving from the school library and walk on her way home, reaching the bridge over the lake and found Lunamon scurrying blindly towards her direction until they bump into each other. It will appear as if the creature was being chased by something, but it disappeared.

Relationship: As long as it’s someone Kira can trust on.
NovelistOfTheSky chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Name: William Murphy (Will)

Gender: Male

Age:17

Built/Body: Reasonable atheletic build (not like an over the top body builder)

Hair & Eyes:Dark brown, nearly black hair with strands of grey. He keeps his hair short, but long enough he can run his hand through it so that some hair sticks up in a messy style. His hair is very soft and thick with a bronze shine to it. dark green/blue (depending on the light) with a hazel ring around the iris

Clothes: Dark blue jeans that are slightly too long,held up by a studded belt. A black t-shirt with a red spiral design on the right of the chest, that shows off some of his build. A white hooded zip up jacket that has a black tribal design across the chest, shoulders and back, usually with the sleeves rolled up. Black skate shoes with red spiral designs

Accessories : Silver watch on left wrist. Black leather wrist band on right wrist. A silver chain with a small pendant at the end, circlular with three curved points meeting in the middle (celtic symbol, means that life constantly moves on with or without you. The three legs of life). A silver chain that runs from his belt to his wallet in his pocket

personality : A very kind and warm hearted person who is very open with anyone he meets. He is always willing to help any friend or someone who needs help (William is old german for guardian and he takes his name as encouragement when helping others). Although he is very hot tempered and always fights for what he believes in, both physically and verbally, he will admit when he is wrong. He can be very stubborn with just about anything as long as he feels what he is doing is right. He will often make bad jokes or make a fool of himself to cheer someone up or just make people laugh. Despite his confident personality, he doubts himself quite often and has low self esteem. He feels lonely unless he is in a group of people. He feels very lost about his place in the world and doesn't understand that sometimes, he's the one who needs help as he bottles up his emotions and hides away from his problems. He feels he can never help someone enough and that he always fails his friends when they need him. He doesn't like talking about his problems as he feels they are petty, should someone try he will turn the conversation very subtly so the other person talks about themself. He despises racists especially because he is Irish and feels no one should feel ashame of who they are.

History: He never met his parents who used to be very rich , powerful people in Ireland (rep.) as they both died of illness when he was a year old. He has never felt sad or that he has lacked family as he was brought up by his brother, Lucas. Will led a pretty uneventful life till he joined sports. He met a girl named Clara when he was 15, who he fell in love with. She fell in love with him and his best friend. Will decided to allow Clara to be happy and stepped down, to let her be with his best friend. The decision haunts him to his day,reminding him he need's to be more selfish. Ever since he was young he has had a passion for ancient history and writing.

Family: Lucas Murphy - Brother - Judge in ireland. Always cool and relaxed, never breaking a sweat in any situation.

Patrick Murphy - father - deceased - business man - died of illness. A very passionate hot tempered man.

Maria Murphy - mother - deceased - business woman - died of illness. Very emotionless woman, ruthless in business

Hobbies: football - reasonably good, tennis - abover average but not talented. Writing - above average but still has a lot of room for improvment. Wful cook but learns quickly. Good street fighter.

Location: New York

Role: Digidestined

Crest: Courage/Friendship/Kindness (whatever you think best suits him for your story)

Digimon: Agumon/Gabumon/Patamon

Stages:Agumon/Greymon/Metal Greymon/ Emperor Greymon(wargreymon if you want to stay true to the line)

Gabumon/Garurumon/Were Garurumon/Metal Garururmon

Patamon/Angemon/ Magna Angemon / Seraphimon

Personality: fun loving and loyal, loves practical jokes, doesnt really understand the idea of human love relationships but just nods. Eats anything. Attempts to eat Will's hair at one point.

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet? A digimon emerges in the real world, Will runs from it, partner saves him. Or if in the digital world, his partner follows hims till he feeds him then refuses to leave him.

Relationship: Yes.

Feel free to let me know if anything needs changing
Haos Soul chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Name: Miles Smith

Gender: Boy

Age: 15

Built/Body: skiny

Hair & Eyes: white hair in a pony tail. green eyes.

Clothes: Purple T-shirt with a white ace of spades on it, and blue jeans.

Accessories: a back pack, were he keeps things he would need.

Personality: Cold, he will only talk to you if he thinks they are worth his time.

History: He was once a cheerful person, but when his little sister, Maria, Died in a fire he seeled himself from everyone.

his mothers job made them have to move to new york.

Hobbies: writing, very good.

Location: new york

Role: Digidestined

Crest: light, Hope an d lasy, friendship.

Digimon: Lopmon

Stages: Cocomon, Lopmon, Wendigomon, Antylamon(Virus)

Personality: a crybaby, amazing that he is friends with Miles at all.

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet?: Miles was walking home from school, when he saw Cocomon in the streets. He grabbed Cocomon and took him hme, they somehow became friends. this all happened when Miles was 14.

Relationship: no.
WolfSummoner93 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
spunds cool, I'll give you two OCs. I can't wait to see how this starts

Name: Reina Smith (prefers to be called Ray)

Gender: female

Age: 16

Built/Body: Reina is tan with a small and lithe build, like a runner or swimmer. She is an average height, 5’5

Hair & Eyes: Her hair is light brown with blue highlights at the tips and tied up in a high ponytail usually. Her eyes are an expressive blue-green

Clothes: Her shirt is white with grey designs- a hear with a crown on top of it and roses circling with heart- with blue paint-like spatters, light blue jeans and bleach sneakers.

Personality: Reina is a bit distant to people and can come off as cold, but really isn’t. She is nice to people she thinks highly of or trusts, but that is a rare few. She seems emotionless- she usually has on a calm/bored face- but if she really gets excited then she will be grinning and laughing. She is also very independent and hates having to ask people for help. She will let ask if her life, or the life of a precious friend, is in danger. Reina likes to speak her mind and give her two cents even if it not asked for. Because of this, she often butts heads with other because she is blunt. No matter how mean it is Reina will speak the truth and tell someone what they need to hear, even if they don’t want to hear it. “If they can’t handle the truth that is their problem” is what she believes.

Reina is better at observing others; how they act, what they do and what their personality is like before she socializes with them. If she thinks that she will get along with that person, then Reina will greet them with a smile and attempt to make friends. If she is sure she won’t get along with them- anyone that is a prissy girly girl, jocks/players, though who think they can get anything they want- then Reina will want nothing to do with them. She isn’t afraid to show them that she isn’t fond of them and will openly show distaste or downright hostility. If they show her they are better than that, then Reina will be more friendly.

History: For most of her life, Reina lived in Columbia South Caroline with her mother- Lindsey- and father –Archie, a Chemistry high school teacher- along with her twin brother Ray (which is where she got her nickname from). She was happy there with her few friends, until her dad announced that they were moving on her 13th birthday. So they packed up and moved to New York, which Reina was NOT happy about. She was not, and still isn’t, used to the big city and often gets lost. She sticks out with her slight southern accent (it isn’t heavy and can only be heard when saying certain words) and her southern hospitality (calling older people ma’am or sir). Her brother seems to fit in well though.

Hobbies: drawing in her sketch book, finding a peaceful and quiet place to read Shakespeare, sitting on her apartment balcony during thunder storms, and napping.

Location: New York, New York

Role: Digidestined

Crest: Sincerity, Knowledge, Freiendship

Digimon: Leormon

Stages:

Rookie: Leormon

Champion: Liomon

Ultimate: LoaderLeomon

Mega: BanchoLeomon

Personality: Leormon is headstrong and territorial. He is wxtremely protective of Reina and will attack anyone he thinks is untrustworthy. He acts big and tough, but he will freak out over water and Kuwagamons.

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet: Reina was walking through the local park one night when she heard a yowl of pain. Thinking a cat was injured she ran to investigate, but instead of a car she saw a wounded Leormon. Even though she was terrified she took the digimon home and cared for him.

Relationship: none yet, but I might change my mine.

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Name: Adam Colt

Gender: mae

Age: 17

Built/Body: and thin with a weak looking appearance, around 5'9. He doesn't look very strong at all.

Hair & Eyes: His hair is a dark brown and spiked up, brushed to the left with bangs that covers his left eye. The eye that you can see is a bright emerald green, while the one that is covered is a foggy green (blind) with a scar going over it.

Clothes: wears a black short-sleeved shirt with a white skull on the front, a red and cream jacket over it, and dark blue jeans. On his feet are black and blue sneakers.

Accessories: A silver chain that has his crest on it

Personality: Adam is sneaky and crafty. He often uses his weak, vulnerable appearance to trick others and get rid of them. He is a good actor and can switch from a weak boy that needs help to a cold hearted killer. He enjoys tricking others and bringing them pain or torturing them. Some might describe him as a sociopath, especially since he loves to taunt his opponents mentally before doing whatever he is ordered to do to them.

He is loyal to his leader and will do anything to please, he will even sacrifice himself if need be. He doesn't care for Digimon and thinks they are nothing but tools to use and get rid of if need be. Adam will send a whole army knowing they will all be slaughtered if it meant even one victory. He is reluctant to send his partner into battle, though. Not because he cares if he is deleted, he just does not want to lose him and be useless.

History: even at a young age Adam was cruel. He would hurt stray cats and dogs- throwing rocks or cans at them- and killed frogs. He bullied kids and often picked fights with gangs- which is how he got that scar on his eye and lost his vision in it- just so he could hurt them. When he was 12 his parents sent him to get tested for any mental problems, where they discovered he was a sociopath. A year later he was put into an institute so he was watched carefully.

After being there for two years he planned his escape. Using his marvelous acting skills, he feigned pain in order to get a nurse’s attention. When he went inside Adam attacked him and knocked him out then proceeded to run. He managed to get out and went into hiding.

Hobbies: Planning his tortures, writing his experiences in a journal (call it a diary and Adam will hurt you) watching the Digidestines and seeing how good they are. Causing trouble and being evil

Location: Hiroshima, Japan

Role: Villain

Crest: (I had to make them up) Vice (an evil habit or practice), Darkness or Cruelty

Digimon: Keramon

Stages:

Rookie: Keramon

Champion: Chrysalimon

Ultimate: Infermon

Mega: Diaboromon

Personality: Just like his partner

How would you like your OC and digimon to meet: Adam sees him messing with some Baby digimon. He watchesand when he sees Keramon delete them he decides that Kreamon is ok.

Relationship: -scoff- that is for the weak
Xavier Masters chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Name: Alonzo Song

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Built/Body: Athletic

Hair & Eyes: Black hair, cut short. purple eyes.

Clothes: A black t-shirt with white trim, black track suit bottoms.

Accessories: a black cap.

Personality: Calm, doesn't mind being the voice of reason.

History: Lived in England till he was ten, moved to new york when his dad died. he lives with his mum.

Hobbies: Magic, pretty good.

Location: new york

Role: Digidestined

Crest: Darkness

Digimon: Impmon

Stages: yaamon, Impmon, Devimon, Mummymon.

Personality: Friendly, doesn't mind making jokes at Alonzo's expense and pretty checky.

Relationship: none, doesn't want one.

Yeah that seems to be all of it.