|Reviews for Falling Out of Love|
| oddly interesting pebble chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
this is beautiful.
like, i'm not even kidding; your prose and kida's voice just bring out the emotion in every sentence. it's gorgeous, and i'm surprised that there weren't more reviews. i guess a lot of people just don't like the pairing. :/
| LilyandIvy chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Damn you (in a good way) this is my favorite pairing!
Beautiful and stirring and damn you I really wanted him to just lean over and kiss her halfway through it! (ignore the rage, really, it's just the fangirl in me)
At least they're sharing the bed. XP
In a serious tone of voice: very well done, especially considering that you don't like the pairing. I felt the more serious side of Masaomi, and the immature parts of him. Also, I liked the touch of the nearly pre-omniscience that Saki sometimes shows. Makes the reader wonder if Izaya hadn't told her that this would happen...
And now, back to your regularly scheduled fangirl meltdown of doom.
| cats2find chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
You didn't screw up at all! This was beautiful! And the ooc-ness wasn't bad. Sometimes, ooc-ness makes the characters sound weird, but this one only made it sound more beautiful! great job on the story! :D
| XIIIAnonymous chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Oh, this is lovely. ;m;