Reviews for Timing is Everything
Leppy99 chapter 18 . 2/21
you need to continue this
Guest chapter 19 . 2/3
This story is amazing! Please update because I need to know the full extent of Bella's powers! Maybe she could train with a Makah? Wise woman who just happens to have the same powers or maybe her Grandmother? Just food for thought.
em chapter 19 . 2/1
this is absolutely fantastic! i hope you update again one day. thanks for sharing :)
maijacob chapter 18 . 1/19
Please please please finish this story! I just re-discovered it and now I am dying to know what happens next! I hope you resume writing this story in the future!
April-Showers82 chapter 19 . 9/27/2014
This is such an awesome story! I love your plot, characters, legends, and situations. Your Sam is much more practical and palatable than SM's Sam. I'm glad that Bella stood up for herself and did not find what Edward was doing as romantic, but creepy as it truly is. Please continue this story! I just love what you are doing with it and would love to see where you take it.
plainjanedee chapter 19 . 6/28/2014
This is in my top 10 fave fics. Such a great alternate story line!

I have really enjoyed this story... So clever and funny in so many places. Love Love Love the J/B plot line and where you're taking the lore! So creative, but seemingly in line with the canon! I think Ed is a bit heavy on the extra psycho stalker profile, but it doesn't take that much to be too much since he WAS a psycho stalker. Hope you find time to finish someday, I'd really enjoy seeing where you go with it.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/1/2014
I really really wish you would continue this story. It's so so good. I love fan fictions where Bella never got with Edward, where Jacob is her first choice. It's so hard to find those stories though. I know I'd hate to be someone's second choice. Anyway... please update.
GypsyWitchBaby chapter 19 . 2/17/2014
I just found your story and am in LOVE! It's so well written, really funny, interesting and original! I really, really hope you start writing this again sometime soon, it's a fanfic gem!
snow eopard chapter 19 . 11/24/2013
Amazing i enjoyed it very much
Leppy99 chapter 19 . 7/27/2013
Love it cant wait for ur next update
afqtie324 chapter 19 . 7/12/2013
Love this story hope you write more
BeckieT108 chapter 19 . 5/26/2013
Nooooo! I've read all the chapters. I'm all caught up. What am I going to do? I'm addicted to these story. How am I going to get my fix now?
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Loved it! Love that Bella has supernatural powers too. I will try and wait patiently for the next update.
Beckiet108
BeckieT108 chapter 18 . 5/26/2013
Yay! Bella is the alpha female! Jake and Bella's relationship is safe from imprinting!

Awesome! Love how you tie everything in... “Toop-kooh Kwar-less” translates into "Black Swan!" I had the same reaction as Jacob!

I guess Cullen's scent on Bella was stopping Jake from gaining control/power of the pack. Very intrigued by your plot twist!
Beckiet108
BeckieT108 chapter 17 . 5/26/2013
It was smart of Jacob to show the footprint at the base of the tree. I would of liked to see(read) that conversation.

YES! Bella must be the Alpha female.
Sam did put Jacob to bed when she ordered him.
Beckiet108
BeckieT108 chapter 16 . 5/26/2013
Jacob didn't imprint on Bella? :( but she's able to ground him? Very interesting!

Oh, oh! Edward has been busted stalking!
Loved the chapter!
Beckiet108
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