|Reviews for Bitemarks & Bloodstains|
| Fleur50 chapter 13 . 8/26/2014
| Fleur50 chapter 12 . 8/26/2014
| Fleur50 chapter 11 . 8/25/2014
| Fleur50 chapter 10 . 8/25/2014
| Fleur50 chapter 9 . 8/25/2014
| Fleur50 chapter 8 . 8/25/2014
| Fleur50 chapter 6 . 8/25/2014
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| Fleur50 chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
| Thata chapter 21 . 8/8/2014
Hi there again, girl!
How are you?
After I finished "Long Way Down" and "Aftermath" I was curious to see what other stories you had under your sleeves and turns out that "Bitemarks & Bloodstains" was already at my "fics I have to read" list.
I enjoyed seeing the differences between your works and the peculiarities of the characters as Jasper's darker and rawer side displayed at B&B and Bella's quiet love, confusion and fierceness as well.
I loved Bella and Emmett's brotherly relationship and how mothering Esme can be, but i just wanted to see Alice and Edward kicked in the ass for good, they're so...just...arg!
I don't quite understand how it turned out that Bella and Jasper weren't really mates. It was clear that their major change was after they met each other and that J/A and B/E's relationship couldn't even be called a real relationship anyway. I get that the mate thing in this fic wasn't about love, but J/B learned and were better because of each other and they accepted the other even at the beginning, with all the flaws no matter what.
Anyway, it was a great fic and you should be proud of your writing and your work.
Kisses from Brazil,
| TempestinTime chapter 21 . 6/20/2014
I have loved this fic possibly more than any i have read. Keeping it to just Jasper's view, the true personality you gave him and the amazing feels make this a work of art.
| mounds01 chapter 9 . 6/9/2014