|Reviews for No Danger Allowed|
| Aurrius chapter 14 . 2/3
| Michoo-Robin chapter 14 . 11/2/2013
I liked the story, the end made me cry :'D
Honestly, I really love this story, I really liked it. 3 3 3
Keep writing good stories, especially about .. Zoro ai Robin :')
#but, besides that, I have one question .. who's Harumi?
And why she was in Mugiwara no Ichimi?
I'm curious -_-?
| VanillaAnime chapter 14 . 9/2/2013
I like the ending, nice conclusion. Dartania! What a good name
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/11/2013
Loved the ending it was just touching but I think u should've added a chapter were the daughter grows up
| knightofstories141912 chapter 14 . 2/8/2013
this is a good story please keep up the good work
| Ayamichan34 chapter 14 . 1/12/2013
Awwww this was such a great story!...
| JeMS7 chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
That was beautiful. I loved the name too, good job.
| LoSTWRITER2 chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
I like it
| GreenCyberWolf chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
Oh such a cute ending! Naming Zoro's daughter after a musketeer fits so well and at least it's not Kuina. I've read so many stories where Zoro's kid is always named Kuina, it gets old real fast, so I'm happy you're original.
| ImperialGuard202 chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
Great way to end this story! Some how I knew it would be a girl and Kuina would get a mention in it. Can't wait to see what you do in 'freak show' and your mysterious big project with your friend. I also hope you write a few stories about the crew and their newest member. there is soooooo much potential there :). so good luck and happy writing.
| NinjaSheik chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
LOVED IT! Robin survived, they have a daughter, and Zoro is proud! Congrats on finally finisihing it!
I hope you continue your other stories, too, like "No On But You". So...please update that soon! :)
| Shadowonthewall6 chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
As usual, this was a brilliant finale to an awesome story and I’m so glad you didn’t keep us in suspense for too long :)
The first scene was great, especially the way you portrayed the crew’s panic over Robin’s current state. I also loved Zoro putting his rivalry with Sanji aside for the woman he loves, as well as accepting his lack of directional skills (sort of) :3
Ah! THE VEST! I knew she wasn’t going to die…or at least I hoped so…
I know it was only a small moment but I absolutely loved how Usopp didn’t even hesitate to give Robin the blood she needed. Now that’s our brave warrior of the sea in action :D
The dialogue between Zoro and Robin after her recovery was really sweet :)
"He's going to be strong, just like his father.”
"No, like his mother."
I think that has to be my favourite line in this chapter, possibly in the whole fic. It was very poignant :3
Of course, the birth of Dartania was a close second :3
That little girl has no idea of the chaos she’s in for :P
The scene where Robin’s water broke was also nicely done (though I do question the logic of using Coup De Burst and sending a ship with a pregnant woman ready to give birth bouncing across the sea but I understand the straw-hats needed to get out of there quickly)
It was also nice how during the scene where the crew was waiting to hear how Robin was doing you lifted the tone with a few laughs (and a nice SanjiXHarumi scene, really interested to see how they’ll get closer during Freak Show considering Harumi’s fear of men and Sanji’s womanising ways)
I also liked how Zoro was hoping for a son but upon seeing his daughter, he decided he was content with the little bundle of joy Robin had given him, as any true parent would :P
Though I do wonder where you got the name of Dartania from. I assume from D’Artagan, considering both Nami and Robin referenced the name but at the same time, I’m not completely sure.
I also loved the one word ending highlighting Zoro thinking about the future.
Basically, you’ve wrote another amazing story Foxchicka and I really enjoyed it. Can’t wait to see what you write next :3
| volvagia09 chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
Ohhhhhh, this is sooooooo cute! Hope you write a story about the life of the Strawhats with Dartania on board. Not now for you have enough to do at the moment, but one day. It would be very interesting ;D
| aRaRaNcHa chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
I really really love your story. XD
Awwww... so cute to imagine how Zoro and Robin's daughter looks like. I love the way Zoro cares about his baby, while he hold her and then tear his tears. Awwww what a cute moment. :3
Heeey make a sequel about how The Straw Hat Pirates would like after Zoro and Robin had baby. I guess there will be so much fun! X3
I can't wait your another story about Zoro and Robin. :)
| graceling42 chapter 14 . 8/19/2012
DAW! It's so sweet! Totally called it. Zoro's gunna be the most over protective dad ever. Wait, does that mean nami and luffy are gunna have a boy? Oi, I don't think the world can handle two Luffy's. Ah well. I guess we'll see.
Great ending to a great story. So very glad you're back :]